Jack Ellison Poet Quatrain

A Spaceship Called Enchantment

The sun shines brightly every day
While the moon shines nightly above 
But the stars reside in your gentle eyes
Like sparkling diamonds of love

On a spaceship called “Enchantment”
We sail the placid seas of bliss
Wrapped in the arms of the goddess of love
Enraptured by the warmth of each kiss

Floating like a couple of heavenly bodies
On a collision course of emotions
Destined to be joined in celestial union
Filled with great love and devotion

There's no greater feeling than mutual love
That poets strive to capture in rhyme
The ultimate emotion known to man
A feeling of joy so sublime

The sun shines brightly every day
While the moon shines nightly above 
But the stars reside in your gentle eyes
My darling, my obsession, my love


© Jack Ellison 2015

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Laura Breidenthal July 15, 2015 at 6:59 PM I feel like I have read this one before. All in all, it is a beautiful masterpiece, Jack. I love your romantic ones! After all, I am a hopeless romantic at heart. Always, Laura Jack Ellison July 15, 2015 at 10:18 PM I have a special place in my heart for "hopeless romantics" WELCOME IN! I love you, Laura my sweet! xxx

Carol Eastman July 4, 2015 at 11:06 AM We're all in a state of Enchantment here... For 2 days we have found the SUN!!!! Yeah!... It's so cool!!! Think the rains finally behind us today... or hope so. Usually get 4-5 inches rain. In May got 9.42 inches. June gave us 13.14 inches. Broke a record with that one... But still can't seem to get the umbrellas out of the penguins flippers... They seem to have become a fashion accessory... LOL... PS. We have a new appreciation for that sun... at least for a little while... Jack Ellison July 15, 2015 at 10:16 PM Just belt out, "Singing in the Rain!" LOL xxx

Kp Nunez July 3, 2015 at 11:19 AM A nice, romantic write for a change...Good one, Jack! :-) Jack Ellison July 3, 2015 at 1:51 PM Did I write that!!! WOW! Must have been in a real mellow mood eh!!! LOL Glad you liked it Kimmie! Love, Jack xxx

Judy Konos July 3, 2015 at 7:03 AM Oh No...this is to mushy for me Jack....I gotta go and haunt somebody else.... Jack Ellison July 3, 2015 at 7:11 AM Mushy is good but maybe it's too early in the morning for that kind of stuff! Wait a minute, it's NEVER to early for messing around!!! Jack... Jack... calm down, YOUR HEART!!! xxxxxxxx