A Space of Quiet

a space of quiet

the gods called a truce
warriors thunder clash ceased
birds  are heard once more
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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September 1, 2017 at 6:33 AM
yeah ok ... not real big on the whole " gods" word ... kinda changes the mood .... uhm yeah ... cant say much more than that ... suprising what can be picked up from a person by just a handful of haikus ... uhm ... we enjoyed your others ... we are the type of writer that swings on words ... uhm ... yeah ... i read some more ... i write what i call impact writes ... this write of yours impacted us for your soul ... we love you ... but ... not as much as the cross ...
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September 1, 2017 at 9:41 AM
Gods to me are just a primitive way of explaining all the attributes of one god. They are immense and perhaps too difficult to encompass in a primitive mind. All is one and one is all. Just my own explanation of the phenomena. Thanks for your honesty.
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