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A Sound of Wind

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Below is the poem entitled A Sound of Wind which was written by poet Felicia Jarvis. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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A Sound of Wind

You called me from a depth where no light can reach.
I thought I heard you, but I noticed that it was just a sound of wind.
I was forced to awake and came to realize that the time spending with you was a just dream.
The wind kept blowing for a while, and suddenly ceased.
After the light came through the clouds,
I found that it wasn't you.
I had been hearing the sound of wind came from far away.
I stood up and started eating at another table.
A  bottle of wine on the table sitting with you was empty from the beginning.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Date: 10/11/2017 4:26:00 AM
I've written poems about the wind but yours is so different, so original. Enjoyed reading it.
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Date: 10/11/2017 6:36:00 AM
I am so happy to hear the word "original". Thank you so much, Victor.
Date: 6/12/2017 4:26:00 PM
Quite beautiful. Highly talented.
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Felicia Jarvis
Date: 6/13/2017 12:55:00 PM
Thank you, OED Loves Me Not.