A Soul's Fantasy

The warmth 
of a summer dream
shines tenderly,
as
red petals of love
blanket a soul;
thawing
the bitter chill
about
her heart
and 
revives this spirit
with 
passion and love
before 
she awakens.


©Ana Espinola Collins

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



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Date: 11/26/2014 5:07:00 PM
Enjoyed reading your passionate work..I am glad that I chose this one to read today..Thanks for stopping by my work and reading..Welcome to soup...Sara
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Date: 11/26/2014 7:05:00 PM
Thanks Sara for your sweet comment...it means a lot to me :) Ana
Date: 11/26/2014 5:02:00 PM
this is really beautiful. Did you mean red petals, as in flower petals? I love that image.
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Date: 11/26/2014 7:04:00 PM
Yes I did....I just corrected the spelling...I can't believe I did that...thanks so much for the heads up Andrea and for your comment :)
Date: 11/26/2014 4:13:00 PM
This is lovely as a poem and for its positivity. You show well the change from sadness to joy. I'd like to see the look on her face when she awakens! // Love the avatar, too, Ana:) #7 // paul
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Date: 11/26/2014 7:16:00 PM
Some things Paul have to be left to the imagination..lol... Thanks for this wonderful compliment...it made my day! :) Ana
Date: 11/26/2014 4:50:00 AM
Soft, beautiful, and so romantic. This makes me think of Sleeping Beauty waiting for her prince.
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Date: 11/26/2014 7:07:00 PM
Wow...Never thought of it that way, but I like it! Thanks Monterey for visiting :)
Date: 11/23/2014 6:55:00 PM
I came by to read this gem again! Thank you!
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Date: 11/22/2014 10:31:00 PM
Beautiful, the poem and the poet!
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Date: 11/23/2014 1:43:00 PM
Such a beautiful comment Arthur...thank you so much...you inspire me to keep writing :)
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