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i wrote this some time back reading it brought tears to my eyes 

A Soulful Song

Beautiful babe simply magic spells thoughts 
by some miracle your beauty appears 
at my side melting heartbeats 

Softly explode warmly bursting echoes 
embraces the purest treasure forever 
to never let go always held special 

A cold moon bites alone gentle beams 
whispers sweet howling roars deeply out
in a long breath hanging mist breathless 

Silver cloud gasping jewel pure divine 
in all that's good to walk with you in life 
the next day awakening sunshine sings 

You're morning smile fills up deep chambers 
with warm beams radiating loves wings 
when taking me to that special place 

Faraway promise if ever I get lost 
without honey sweetheart that you will 
find me inside every thought a dream wish 

Holding hands shadow one mahatma 
spirit of a thousand lovers cry deeply 
a soul sings out cast under 

On magic dust wishes granting Heaven 
sighs in breath of one dream special moment 
held in time warmly holding kisses you

unrhymed tercet
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Leach Avatar
January 29, 2015 at 7:55 PM
Magical! Beautifully written.
Mcdaid Avatar
February 1, 2015 at 5:31 PM
alesia thank you kindly for the dazzling comment deeply appreciated bless you
Marcum Wong Avatar
January 29, 2015 at 10:30 AM
Lovery words that congregate to express the beauty of our planet through the eyes of love.
Mcdaid Avatar
January 29, 2015 at 1:07 PM
no truer words i have heard spoken connie love you can paint all colors of the sky it opens your eyes wide with wonder thank you for the amazing comment you hit it on the nail my thoughts bless you dear friend
Trifiatis Avatar
January 29, 2015 at 4:48 AM
Sparkling expressions, beaming feelings, phantasmagoric images, dear Liam! Excellent!
Mcdaid Avatar
January 29, 2015 at 6:02 AM
ah thank you demetrios truly heartfelt wonderful comment dear friend bless you with a warm smile
Roper Avatar
January 28, 2015 at 8:46 PM
A very heartfelt poem expressing your strong affection, Liam, a 7 my friend
Mcdaid Avatar
January 29, 2015 at 6:04 AM
all one can do is draw how one feels deep inside eve thank you dear friend for the beautiful comment deeply appreciated
Andresen Avatar
January 28, 2015 at 7:37 PM
- Liam, sitting here in the dark night to read your beautiful poem - Sleep will not come ..... :) - A deeply moving poem my friend ..... goodnight - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Mcdaid Avatar
January 29, 2015 at 6:18 AM
ahh dear anne lise you are a true friend thank you so kindly heartfelt comment deeply appreciated bless you always in his light have a wonderful day pal
Petersen Potter Avatar
January 28, 2015 at 11:53 AM
Hi Liam! Very beautiful pen! This is a very sweet tender and very romantic love poem that surely speaks to one hearts just like a colorful rainbow and enchanting love songs and sunshine and a warm smile. Very touching. My heart is truly moved by it, my dearest friend Liam.A huge 7 +++ from me! A most endearing, loving , beautiful piece to be held very close to ones heart. smiling. I enjoy it! Your pen is mighty golden! You're the romantic poet! To me you're the best. Have a very lovely day! God bless you always and keep you strong in His light !:) Love and hugs! XOOXXXOX D. ^O^
Mcdaid Avatar
January 29, 2015 at 6:21 AM
dorian dear friend thank you ever so kindly for the truly wonderful comment bless you heartfelt appreciated pal you also have a great day
Relish Avatar
January 28, 2015 at 11:41 AM
The love you feel flows through your poems... a beautiful pen Liam... be blessed... love, nad!
Mcdaid Avatar
January 29, 2015 at 6:27 AM
thank you nad yeah the pen always speaks the deep truth dear friend bless you always wonderful comment wishing you a wonderful day
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