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i wrote this some time back reading it brought tears to my eyes 

Beautiful babe simply magic spells thoughts by some miracle your beauty appears at my side melting heartbeats Softly explode warmly bursting echoes embraces the purest treasure forever to never let go always held special A cold moon bites alone gentle beams whispers sweet howling roars deeply out in a long breath hanging mist breathless Silver cloud gasping jewel pure divine in all that's good to walk with you in life the next day awakening sunshine sings You're morning smile fills up deep chambers with warm beams radiating loves wings when taking me to that special place Faraway promise if ever I get lost without honey sweetheart that you will find me inside every thought a dream wish Holding hands shadow one mahatma spirit of a thousand lovers cry deeply a soul sings out cast under On magic dust wishes granting Heaven sighs in breath of one dream special moment held in time warmly holding kisses you unrhymed tercet

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 1/29/2015 7:55:00 PM
Magical! Beautifully written.
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 2/1/2015 5:31:00 PM
alesia thank you kindly for the dazzling comment deeply appreciated bless you
Date: 1/29/2015 10:30:00 AM
Lovery words that congregate to express the beauty of our planet through the eyes of love.
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 1/29/2015 1:07:00 PM
no truer words i have heard spoken connie love you can paint all colors of the sky it opens your eyes wide with wonder thank you for the amazing comment you hit it on the nail my thoughts bless you dear friend
Date: 1/29/2015 4:48:00 AM
Sparkling expressions, beaming feelings, phantasmagoric images, dear Liam! Excellent!
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 1/29/2015 6:02:00 AM
ah thank you demetrios truly heartfelt wonderful comment dear friend bless you with a warm smile
Date: 1/28/2015 8:46:00 PM
A very heartfelt poem expressing your strong affection, Liam, a 7 my friend
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 1/29/2015 6:04:00 AM
all one can do is draw how one feels deep inside eve thank you dear friend for the beautiful comment deeply appreciated
Date: 1/28/2015 7:37:00 PM
- Liam, sitting here in the dark night to read your beautiful poem - Sleep will not come ..... :) - A deeply moving poem my friend ..... goodnight - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 1/29/2015 6:18:00 AM
ahh dear anne lise you are a true friend thank you so kindly heartfelt comment deeply appreciated bless you always in his light have a wonderful day pal
Date: 1/28/2015 11:53:00 AM
Hi Liam! Very beautiful pen! This is a very sweet tender and very romantic love poem that surely speaks to one hearts just like a colorful rainbow and enchanting love songs and sunshine and a warm smile. Very touching. My heart is truly moved by it, my dearest friend Liam.A huge 7 +++ from me! A most endearing, loving , beautiful piece to be held very close to ones heart. smiling. I enjoy it! Your pen is mighty golden! You're the romantic poet! To me you're the best. Have a very lovely day! God bless you always and keep you strong in His light !:) Love and hugs! XOOXXXOX D. ^O^
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 1/29/2015 6:21:00 AM
dorian dear friend thank you ever so kindly for the truly wonderful comment bless you heartfelt appreciated pal you also have a great day
Date: 1/28/2015 11:41:00 AM
The love you feel flows through your poems... a beautiful pen Liam... be blessed... love, nad!
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 1/29/2015 6:27:00 AM
thank you nad yeah the pen always speaks the deep truth dear friend bless you always wonderful comment wishing you a wonderful day

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