Krishnanand Guptar Poet Rhyme

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Written 13 March 2026 for Let`s Minichu on Feelings Poetry Contest of Mohan Chutani

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A Sorrowful Plight

Deep ache in my heart lies
A sorrowful shade spreads in all nooks of my room
Hot tears rise
 
The sun shines bright
Still my life is filled with deep gloom
Upright,

My plight
Vouchsafed to doom`s
Blight

Deep ache in my heart lies
Still my life is filled with deep gloom
Blight

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Valsa George March 20, 2026 at 9:54 PM Very poignant and heartbreaking. Beautifully done.Congratulations on your win, dear friend.

Mohan Chutani March 19, 2026 at 7:59 AM Krishnanand, thanks for participating in my contest. The feelings of sorrow & helplessness despite the sun shining bright is well reflected. Congratulations for your placement. Best. Mohan. Krishnanand Guptar March 20, 2026 at 12:15 PM Thank you poet friend for appreciating the above poem and for its placemnt in the contest sponsored by you. Wishing you a pleasant forthcoming weekend.

Andrea Dietrich March 15, 2026 at 12:49 PM If you did the form correctly, you created an exceptional poem from this form. I really like this