A Sorrow Too Deep

Kayla shouts Father! Father!  I'm here!
Kayla? he cries crouching, arms outspread
I'm here now sweetie, there's nothing to fear
But he wakes to a life far beyond dread

With the world asleep he drives through the night
There's the hospital which offered such hope
Oh, his angel!  His God-given delight!
His grief's too deep, but somehow, he copes

Streets still and empty; a brisk Sunday morn
Bland buildings sprouting in cold cement
From natures blessed gift he is shorn
The wound can't heal; was his life truly meant?

Wife and friends seem odd; not fully real
Banal, empty, irksome words swirl
The mirror's harsh truths on his face reveal
He lost his life when he lost his sweet girl

Written 8/25/22
A BRIAN STRAND PREMIERE CHOICE CONTEST
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

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Riabi Dziri Avatar
October 5, 2022 at 1:34 PM
The heart sinks into oblivion as it is emptied of Love and meaning.. Your poetry is filled with the beauty of humanity that only wanes when death pays a harsh visit.. a great delight to read you, Robert! My deepest regards and blessings.
Tor Avatar
September 2, 2022 at 12:38 PM
Wow! Robert your words are incredibly effective in conveying such pain. Your ability to put the reader in that state of devestation is a credit to your awesome writing abilities. I love your passion and meticulous choice of words. The theme was conveyed perfectly by you. Truly appreciate your effort as always. Your creativity and detailed wording is very impressive. I know when I read any Poetry from you it will always be exceptional, and this Poem is proof of that. Keep on writing my friend...
Gorelick Avatar
September 9, 2022 at 2:56 PM
Whenever I doubt my abilities your kind words never fail to inspire. God Bless
Canerdy Avatar
August 30, 2022 at 1:34 PM
Your descriptive, heart-wrenching poem describes devastating grief almost beyond bearing, Robert. Janice
Gorelick Avatar
August 31, 2022 at 1:11 PM
My aim in writing poems like this is to commiserate with those who have gone through similar experiences. Robert
Buhagiar Avatar
August 27, 2022 at 6:34 AM
So sad to lose one's love. Excellent write.
Gorelick Avatar
August 27, 2022 at 6:22 PM
Sometimes a sorrow is too deep to bear, Victor. Glad you enjoyed.
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