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A Sonnet For Reckless Abandon

The sun in the sky drew my attention I gazed into it like my lover's eye The moment was perfect for retention And I could do naught but just watch and lie. Then daydreams took hold and I was aflight. Clouds parted just to allow me access And I was airborne straight into the night. Where else could I go but towards success? My eyes were on fire with the light of day, And naturally you just stayed on my mind The time we spent was the typical way In which our love will impossibly bind. So just allow this perfect bliss to last: Like still, sweet lips that brushed mine in the past.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 6/13/2010 2:18:00 AM
Awesome poem! Enjoyed very much.
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Date: 6/11/2010 9:11:00 AM
This is excellent. It flows very well. I like the imagery in the words. Great job! Joseph
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Date: 6/10/2010 5:56:00 PM
Welcome to Poetry Soup Family.. so enjoyed your creative write tonight... with luv from the "Sweetheart"
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Date: 6/10/2010 11:37:00 AM
It was a pleasure to read your poetry this afternoon Josh. Wishing you another day filled with inspiration. Love, Carol
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