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A Song of Sparrows

Here lies the whistling hollowed bones of lovebirds 
Entrenched in storm torn skylines
Set flight amidst torrents
Breaking body and soul
Failing to find the fervent love in them in others

death of a friendifree verse

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Sara Kendrick

January 9, 2023 at 6:20 AM

Skaidiv, I read your poem which you entered in my contest and found it a very nice work. Thank you for sharing it with me and others. It did not have the quote number on it that I needed to know from which quote you were going to write your poem.Keep on writing... Sara

Skaidiv Morjin

January 11, 2023 at 10:58 AM

Hey Sara thanks for affording me the opportunity, could you perhaps elaborate on what you reference as a quote number, many thanks, thanks again Skaidiv

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart

December 28, 2022 at 6:52 PM

I think I want to sit with this one for a while. Lovely done. xomo

Skaidiv Morjin

December 30, 2022 at 8:52 AM

Thanks again, this one just past experience, the classic "a bird and a fish may fall in love but where would they stay?" except it's just two birds (in my view)

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