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A Song of Sparrows

Here lies the whistling hollowed bones of lovebirds Entrenched in storm torn skylines Set flight amidst torrents Breaking body and soul Failing to find the fervent love in them in others

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/9/2023 6:20:00 AM

Skaidiv, I read your poem which you entered in my contest and found it a very nice work. Thank you for sharing it with me and others. It did not have the quote number on it that I needed to know from which quote you were going to write your poem.Keep on writing... Sara

Skaidiv Morjin
Date: 1/11/2023 10:58:00 AM

Hey Sara thanks for affording me the opportunity, could you perhaps elaborate on what you reference as a quote number, many thanks, thanks again Skaidiv

Maureen Mcgreavy

Date: 12/28/2022 6:52:00 PM

I think I want to sit with this one for a while. Lovely done. xomo

Skaidiv Morjin
Date: 12/30/2022 8:52:00 AM

Thanks again, this one just past experience, the classic "a bird and a fish may fall in love but where would they stay?" except it's just two birds (in my view)