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A Song of Me

The strings play with passion and soul... Each chord sings out with another word to hold.. My voice screams with sounds of my heart... To a ceiling of clouds and feelings never apart... A chorus of cry's not meant to be seen... Notes and letters,all scrambled on paper dreams... This is my song of long walks and restless nights... My heartbeat is my bass and my mind is my sight...

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Allie Lusha

Date: 1/26/2011 7:38:00 AM

Struck a chord with me... doesn't music just carry you from one emotion to the other I can't imagine a life without music its in my heart....loved it ...Allie

Wilma Neels

Date: 1/21/2011 5:39:00 AM

Stunning write, from the heart, I absolutely love your last line Michael.. love W

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 1/20/2011 7:37:00 PM

Great Michael.. just get back to me and be safe in this snow storm luv... talk soon.. Jersey Girl keeping warm and cozy with her 'bear'..haha.. with luv.. my W.K..

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 1/20/2011 10:56:00 AM

You always write from your heart and have a melodic quality in your poetry. Indeed, this poem could be used to describe the Michael we all know and love. My favorite line is "A choris of cries not meant to be seen." And my desk is littered with notes and letters "all scrambled on paper dreams." Very nice! Love, Carolyn

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 1/20/2011 7:38:00 AM

Oh u might enjoy reading The Light I posted late yesterday.. it might stir something special inside ... it did me..luv..

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 1/20/2011 7:37:00 AM

Yes ..MIchael.. I am going to return to my luv poetry shortly... and forgive me for taking so long with the contest .. so much happening here... your lovely lines soothe my angry waves this am... can always count on my White Knight.. your Jersey Girl... promises tonight for sure..luv..

Gert W. Knop

Date: 1/20/2011 6:41:00 AM

Excellent write, ma frien! Enjoyed the read this early afternoon!....Gert

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 1/20/2011 6:12:00 AM

I enjoyed reading your excellent poetry this morning Michael. A heartfelt write. Wishing you a wonderful day. Love, Carol

John Mcmahon

Date: 1/19/2011 10:52:00 PM

i like my heart beat is my bass, that is a nice line, this is a beautiful poem

Audrey Haick

Date: 1/19/2011 10:18:00 PM

Beautiful expressive Lyric! A song that is from your soul, Michael! A fav. Always, Annalise

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 1/19/2011 3:49:00 PM

Nice song Michael, the song plays for a ledgend at heart.. Your tunes carries a nice image with beauty, no matter the mtoions and melody of feeling... glad i stopped by to read the song about you,..p.d.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 1/19/2011 3:49:00 PM

legend... lol,, not ledgend..

Christine A Kysely

Date: 1/19/2011 2:36:00 PM

Love it...Can hear the "Bass"!!! Christine

Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/19/2011 2:24:00 PM

Very descriptive, expressive, and emotive work..I am glad that I chose this one to read this afternoon..Enjoyed.Your presence at my work was uplifting ...Sara