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A Son of God

They say the One who loves me most Is nothing but a hoax They say the God who gave me breath Is just a wise old anecdote They say I lack accountability And self-esteem, and truth But I know the wretched man I am I need no further proof Yet who are they to say Christ’s loving hands weren’t pierced for me? Can they take back the alabaster That anointed Him to bleed? Can they not see I am indebted? For I was never worth the cost I might as well have been the Roman Who nailed Him to the cross He could have left me as a wicked man To die and then be gone But by His blood and sacrifice I became a son of God 1 John 3 New (NKJV): 3 "Behold what manner of love the Father has bestowed on us, that we should be called children of God!..."

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Date: 3/13/2020 9:52:00 AM
I once stood up in front of church and said "I am a sinner" and the whole church clapped. I was actually just trying to get the children's sermon started,but I can relate to this one.
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Date: 4/5/2019 11:24:00 AM
We often judge ourselves the most harshly but we are all accepted as children of God. A heartfelt write Kyle.When filled with the Lord's spirit anything is possible. A lovely insightful write. Easter blessings my friend. : )
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Date: 3/15/2019 11:44:00 PM
Not only a superb message, but exquisitely written and presented ... wonderful phrasing, excellent meter and rhythm, fresh perspective, and full of truth and faithful dedication - love it! For ALL have fallen short ... and I am the least of these, yet my horrid soul He saw as worthy. There is no more powerful word than grace. Blessings, Kyle, keep up the great work! :-)
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Date: 2/19/2019 11:10:00 PM
Nice Well Written
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Date: 2/5/2019 1:33:00 AM
Kyle, thank you for a lovely to the point poem, I love it.
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Date: 2/2/2019 11:56:00 PM
i thoroughly enjoyed reading your poem.
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Date: 1/12/2019 1:02:00 AM
Very well written. We could never do enough to erase our sin. His love and mercy are so great that he gave Himself on the cross for all of us. Unfortunately there will always those who dont believe. Great write.
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Date: 1/9/2019 11:33:00 AM
Hello Kyle, a lovely poem. And all I can say is....is.....Amen!!!! have a nice day my friend.
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Date: 1/8/2019 4:39:00 PM
Very nice Kyle!
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Date: 1/5/2019 10:33:00 AM
This is wonderful brother... They don't see, they don't know, they cannot even comprehend... But the wisdom of this world is like foolishness to Him, the strength of this world is nowhere compared to his weakness... So hold on to the almighty and you will stay redeemed... This goes to my fav immediately. Great write brother. A wonderful 2019 I wish u
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Date: 1/5/2019 7:29:00 AM
As I read your poem, I felt the intensity of your heartfelt write of genuine faith and worship. A cherubic message to everyone..an enlightening experience, Kyle.
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Date: 1/4/2019 11:29:00 PM
A beautiful write that is a tribute to your faith, and a wonderful God. Well done, and I am glad you are sharing this Kyle.
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Date: 1/4/2019 10:40:00 PM
Kyle, Line Gauthier sent me a message telling me how to access your poem because she felt I would like it --- and she was absolutely right. It is wonderful and speaks volumes as to how I feel about our Lord and Savior, Jesus Christ. I am pleased to know that there are others on Soup who will unashamedly share their love for Him. Thank you for this wonderful poem.
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Date: 1/4/2019 10:52:00 PM
I am so honored that you were directed to my poem and so happy you were able to relate! Thanks for stopping by!
Date: 1/4/2019 9:44:00 PM
Beautifully penned, Kyle.
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Date: 1/4/2019 9:00:00 PM
A wonderful read! Love it!
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