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A soldiers wish

Give me reason to live, give me reason to love. Fill my soul full of hope light the stars up above. Let my eyes see the beauty that women desire, let my heart beat with wings to soar high and higher. If none of these things are yours to give then paint me a picture where we both can live. A place full of harmony peaceful and still. Where deaths touch is lost with no fresh graves to fill. This above all will give me reason to love, this will light the stars up above.

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Date: 10/8/2018 11:49:00 PM
Very, very good. You have written something quite profound, capturing thoughts and presenting them in way that is really quite special. Best regards David
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Dimpra Kaleem
Date: 10/9/2018 1:09:00 AM
Thank you David for your kind words. DK
Date: 3/20/2018 6:09:00 PM
Hi Dimpra, beautifully penned , hopefully the world will fill with love and soldiers will be no more ::)))) hugs
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Dimpra Kaleem
Date: 3/20/2018 9:09:00 PM
We can only hope. Thank you Niall x
Date: 3/5/2018 1:31:00 PM
Hello Dimpra, so nice to meet you. Are you new to poetry Soup? If so welcome.I like this poem and hope this solider gets his wish. have a nice day my friend.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 3/7/2018 2:20:00 PM
I will read more, keep on writing. have a nice day my friend.
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Dimpra Kaleem
Date: 3/5/2018 8:10:00 PM
Hi Darlene. Newish I guess. About six weeks maybe. Thank you for reading my work. Have a great day.
Date: 2/18/2018 9:04:00 PM
There IS a "spiritual paradise" that's not been painted. ONE Faith ....exist with global unity. No one war's against another. They've fulfilled verse on United Nations, building, by "Beating their swords into plowshares". "No fresh graves they fill ....except their own for not killing.You write so beautifully,,true poet! Congrats..bbn Glad met you!
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Dimpra Kaleem
Date: 2/18/2018 9:08:00 PM
Thank you so much for your kind words.
Date: 2/7/2018 10:17:00 PM
Very beautiful! Thoughtful and well penned.
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Dimpra Kaleem
Date: 2/7/2018 10:18:00 PM
Thank you joe
Date: 2/7/2018 9:35:00 PM
there are those who write poems and there are those who write poetry, to write poetry you must have the soul of a poet, you dear poet write poetry and have the soul of a poet.
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Dimpra Kaleem
Date: 2/7/2018 10:04:00 PM
Thank you frederic
Date: 2/6/2018 9:47:00 PM
this is so beautiful, u painted the world with such beautiful imagery Dimpra, a fav for me
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Dimpra Kaleem
Date: 2/6/2018 9:50:00 PM
Thank you Lewis
Date: 1/29/2018 6:08:00 AM
Well written Dimpra..
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Dimpra Kaleem
Date: 2/6/2018 9:50:00 PM
Thank you
Date: 1/29/2018 1:14:00 AM
- A beautiful wish, beauty, love, harmony and peace - I enjoy your poem, Dimpra :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Dimpra Kaleem
Date: 1/29/2018 1:19:00 AM
Thank you Anne-lose. I am very happy that you liked it x