A Soldier- I Was

Lonely I was when I stood staring at the sky
Had a gun in my hand, was too afraid to cry
Fought bitter battles and never lived to tell
How at the altar of freedom, my body fell

My soul searches for reasons as to why I died
Did I save my people, had I tried?
Do they remember me, my deeds, my name
Are they proud of me or did I bring them shame

My battered body stood testimony to my fate
My heart had stopped in a battle brought about by hate
I had screamed in pain, and shivered with fright
But before I died, I did put up a fight

Remember me, my beloved country
It was I, my men, who brought you victory
I fought to the last bullet in my gun
I was a soldier, I was your son
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Williams Avatar
March 13, 2017 at 3:40 AM
A very well written and emotional poem Manoj
Kumar Avatar
March 16, 2017 at 2:15 AM
Thank You Maria
Gautam Avatar
November 23, 2015 at 3:03 AM
A wonderful poem !! All the emotions are expounded so well...
Nayak Avatar
July 28, 2015 at 6:40 AM
Great poem...!!! Patriotism and martyrdom highlighted...salutations to all the soldiers who encounter death defending their country! Flow and feel of the poem touched my soul....
Nagar Avatar
October 4, 2010 at 6:11 PM
Phenomenal!!! The pride, the hurt, the questions, the pleas - the emotions are brought across wonderfully!!!
Weatherman Avatar
August 25, 2009 at 8:04 AM
this was amazing..this really was very touching and it makes me sad because I have family fighting for us and this says it all..you are a wonderful writer
Gokul Avatar
March 10, 2009 at 9:50 PM
nerve tingling...gave me goose bumps as I read it. still at a loss for words...Beautiful! despite all the pain and sorrow, that's just what it is - Beautiful...
Guzzi Avatar
January 11, 2009 at 5:15 PM
Sigh. Light & Love Debbie Guzzi
Higgins Avatar
January 2, 2009 at 6:27 AM
Terrific. I love the flow of this poem and the writing that gives us a different viewpoint.
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