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A Softer Glow

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A softer glow from sunset's chandelier
Warm kisses on the pier of surrender
Reflections captured by lover's so clear
Romance entangles when evenings render
Silhouettes shade where the horizon meets
Timeless and breathless when passions persist
The Sea's slow metronome measures heartbeats
Inraptured kisses and a twilight's mist
To feel the soul shimmer beneath the sky
Hear the Sea lap on the poles of the pier
Find quiet realms in the calm of an eye
That silently lift whenever I'm near
The beauty of love we found by the Sea
Kept close to our heart a silent decree


3/26/18 contest Picture This image 3

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Line Gauthier

Date: 4/11/2018 9:49:00 PM

Back with well deserved congrats, Frederic.

Artsieladie Sharon Donnelly

Date: 4/3/2018 3:58:00 AM

Your title, "A Softer Glow" is so fitting, Frederic. We often get caught up in the passion and desire, its heat and fire, we tend to forget or overlook the 'softness and gentleness' of love, which you remind me of superbly well. :) Congrats! ~ Artsie

Susan Gentry

Date: 4/1/2018 10:38:00 PM

Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed your interpretation of this pic.

Heidi Sands

Date: 4/1/2018 9:11:00 AM

I like the line - hear the sea lap on the poles of the pier - and a great ending to the poem too. Congratulations for your win Frederic :)

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 4/1/2018 8:31:00 AM

- Congratulations on your winning poem, Frederic :) - Enjoy the last days of Easter :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart

Date: 4/1/2018 8:23:00 AM

A lullaby of a sonnet, smooth as silk, lovely stuff :) congratulations on your win! xomo

Joseph May

Date: 4/1/2018 7:12:00 AM

Beautiful write Frederic...Congrats on your win

Yazmin Malik

Date: 3/29/2018 7:52:00 AM

Soothing poetry <3. fine pen in hand :)

FJ Thomas

Date: 3/27/2018 6:47:00 PM

The two are a perfect fit dear Frederic. But your words have always been stirring :)

Evie Cw

Date: 3/27/2018 4:56:00 AM

WOW!! This sonnet of yours Frederic purely majestic.It raves in a timeless of passions along a great mass of a sea. Sonnets can really come alive within a beauty of a soul.

Line Gauthier

Date: 3/26/2018 10:45:00 PM

Lovely. Superbly done, Frederic.