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A Softer Glow

A softer glow from sunset's chandelier
Warm kisses on the pier of surrender
Reflections captured by lover's so clear
Romance entangles when evenings render
Silhouettes shade where the horizon meets
Timeless and breathless when passions persist
The Sea's slow metronome measures heartbeats
Inraptured kisses and a twilight's mist
To feel the soul shimmer beneath the sky
Hear the Sea lap on the poles of the pier
Find quiet realms in the calm of an eye
That silently lift whenever I'm near
The beauty of love we found by the Sea
Kept close to our heart a silent decree


3/26/18 contest Picture This image 3
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Gauthier Avatar
April 11, 2018 at 9:49 PM
Back with well deserved congrats, Frederic.
Donnelly Avatar
April 3, 2018 at 3:58 AM
Your title, "A Softer Glow" is so fitting, Frederic. We often get caught up in the passion and desire, its heat and fire, we tend to forget or overlook the 'softness and gentleness' of love, which you remind me of superbly well. :) Congrats! ~ Artsie
Gentry Avatar
April 1, 2018 at 10:38 PM
Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed your interpretation of this pic.
Sands Avatar
April 1, 2018 at 9:11 AM
I like the line - hear the sea lap on the poles of the pier - and a great ending to the poem too. Congratulations for your win Frederic :)
Andresen Avatar
April 1, 2018 at 8:31 AM
- Congratulations on your winning poem, Frederic :) - Enjoy the last days of Easter :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Pigeon Tart Avatar
April 1, 2018 at 8:23 AM
A lullaby of a sonnet, smooth as silk, lovely stuff :) congratulations on your win! xomo
May Avatar
April 1, 2018 at 7:12 AM
Beautiful write Frederic...Congrats on your win
Malik Avatar
March 29, 2018 at 7:52 AM
Soothing poetry <3. fine pen in hand :)
Thomas Avatar
March 27, 2018 at 6:47 PM
The two are a perfect fit dear Frederic. But your words have always been stirring :)
Cw Avatar
March 27, 2018 at 4:56 AM
WOW!! This sonnet of yours Frederic purely majestic.It raves in a timeless of passions along a great mass of a sea. Sonnets can really come alive within a beauty of a soul.
Gauthier Avatar
March 26, 2018 at 10:45 PM
Lovely. Superbly done, Frederic.
B. Avatar
March 26, 2018 at 6:23 PM
"Absolutely breathtaking creativity Frederic". Fantastic job!!
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