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A Snowy Day In March

A snowy day in March
And through the grey silenced day
the whispers of birds

Forlorn in the eyes of man
Fantasy of a progressing spring

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Kim Hilliker

Date: 3/19/2010 10:24:00 AM

Great Tanka, Gert. I enjoyed reading it this morning.

Caroline Cécile Delacroix

Date: 3/16/2010 10:48:00 PM

Very nice, Gert! The certainty of spring coming is wondrous. Nice Tanka. Thanks for sharing and thank you for your comments on mine. I hope you have recovered from the flu. Best wishes, Caroline.

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 3/14/2010 2:42:00 PM

You are making me hungry!! I will have to try your recipes--I make something similar to the potato soup-my grandmother called it stewed potatoes not soup but sounds the same--good!!

Carrie Richards

Date: 3/13/2010 5:33:00 PM

We finally got a touch of spring this week...but it still feels chilly like a snowy day in March! Spring is on the horizon, won't be long now!! (I hope!) Nicely written, Gert! ~ Love, Carrie

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 3/13/2010 3:05:00 PM

enjoyed reading, thanks for your comments.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 3/13/2010 1:13:00 PM

It all seems like fantasy right now but it is slowly happening then it will seem like it is a great flourish...Keep the creative pen flowing. Thanks for stopping by and commenting in my work. Sara

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 3/13/2010 8:58:00 AM

Quite an image is created in the first three lines of your tanka, Gert. And I love the way you drove home your message in the last two. Excellent tanka! Love, Carolyn

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/12/2010 10:32:00 AM

Gert, I really like this one. IN line four there, did you mean the word "of" man? Thanks for your sweet comments. Usually when I put a sonnet in a contest, it does not fare very well. I think sonnets are not much liked here, but I appreciate what you said about mine and the people who seem to be liking it. LUv, Andrea

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