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A Snow White Morning

stride of kinetic mind twiddle-dee-dee dum tulips songbirds in sunshine a litany of lit trees dayspring trilling as I walk

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/25/2020 1:28:00 PM

delightful imagery, Kim!

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/25/2020 3:55:00 PM

Thank you, Andrea! Walks do me good!

Gershon Wolf

Date: 5/24/2020 7:32:00 PM

Nothing like those tulips angling for the sunlight. Can provide some bizarre angles. Superb tanka, Kim! :) gw

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/24/2020 8:52:00 PM

Thank you! :)

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 5/24/2020 5:49:00 AM

Your words help me visualize a gorgeous vase of white roses, and a pretty day! I need both right now; this sheltering-in-place is a killer!

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/24/2020 4:11:00 PM

Glad I could encourage you, sweet friend! Hope we get out of this hole soon though in some ways it did the country good.

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 5/24/2020 4:44:00 AM

You seem like a very happy soul Kim and capable of surmounting and challenging anything that crosses your path - - your dayspring trilling as you walk makes me think so! Great poem my friend. Blessings, Jennifer.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/24/2020 4:11:00 PM

Thank you, Jennifer! You have a wonderful day and week!