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A Snow White Morning

stride of kinetic mind

      twiddle-dee-dee dum tulips

songbirds in sunshine

       a litany of lit trees

            dayspring trilling as I walk

Copyright © Kim Rodrigues | Year Posted 2020

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Andrea Dietrich Date: 5/25/2020 1:28:00 PM delightful imagery, Kim! Login to Reply Kim Rodrigues Date: 5/25/2020 3:55:00 PM Thank you, Andrea! Walks do me good!

Gershon Wolf Date: 5/24/2020 7:32:00 PM Nothing like those tulips angling for the sunlight. Can provide some bizarre angles. Superb tanka, Kim! :) gw Login to Reply Kim Rodrigues Date: 5/24/2020 8:52:00 PM Thank you! :)

Caren Krutsinger Date: 5/24/2020 5:49:00 AM Your words help me visualize a gorgeous vase of white roses, and a pretty day! I need both right now; this sheltering-in-place is a killer! Login to Reply Kim Rodrigues Date: 5/24/2020 4:11:00 PM Glad I could encourage you, sweet friend! Hope we get out of this hole soon though in some ways it did the country good.

Jennifer Proxenos Date: 5/24/2020 4:44:00 AM You seem like a very happy soul Kim and capable of surmounting and challenging anything that crosses your path - - your dayspring trilling as you walk makes me think so! Great poem my friend. Blessings, Jennifer. Login to Reply Kim Rodrigues Date: 5/24/2020 4:11:00 PM Thank you, Jennifer! You have a wonderful day and week!

JCB Brul Date: 5/24/2020 1:17:00 AM Wow!! I feel and see tulips as I read this poem. Here in Busan they grow abundantly in early Spring. Login to Reply Kim Rodrigues Date: 5/24/2020 4:12:00 PM I love them better than roses! They are my romantic flower of choice! Be blessed, sweet lady!

Michael Tor Date: 5/23/2020 11:59:00 AM Kim superb imagery here. Enjoyed reading thank you for posting. Login to Reply Kim Rodrigues Date: 5/23/2020 2:43:00 PM Thank you, Michael!

Mark Koplin Date: 5/23/2020 11:05:00 AM A very lovely piece Kim. Login to Reply Kim Rodrigues Date: 5/23/2020 11:26:00 AM Thank you, Mark!