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A Snazzy Day

one snazzy day you walked by my way I stopped for your number but couldn't stay the sun touched your hair like angel wings your halo from above, a gift you bring to both of us cause your hearts so pure our love will never die, for that I'm sure your halo imparts gifts of tenderness and love like white sunshine, you come from above so, this poem I give with words to impart my heart belongs to you and will never depart your soft kindness and radiant love I see you wholly and more with eyes of doves never forget my words, hear my words you are my comfort and company, my sword!

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Date: 9/3/2010 7:23:00 PM
Thanks for commenting on my poetry, a lovely love poem you have penned, I love that line, the sun touched your hair like angel wings.. love Constance
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Date: 9/3/2010 7:02:00 PM
Very nice and creative piece on love and its feelings, susan
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Date: 9/3/2010 10:37:00 AM
Very sweet poem, Susan, hope you are having a great Friday. LUv, Andrea
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