Notes About The Poem

A Snail

a snail
on the move?
almost motionless...
to nowhere,
mocking time.



Date written: 05/18/2021
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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June 5, 2021 at 2:39 PM
For us could be my frien but not for that God's creature... Very good, salute alkas
Alex Avatar
May 19, 2021 at 4:36 AM
A short beautiful poem.
Ibeh Avatar
May 19, 2021 at 5:06 AM
Thank you, Christuraj:-)
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May 18, 2021 at 3:00 PM
But when he hits the gas we shout...LOOK AT THE S-CAR-GO
Ibeh Avatar
May 18, 2021 at 4:26 PM
Haha, that's a good one, John:-) Thanks for dropping by!
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