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A Smudge of Heaven

A father looks down on his newborn child a mirror of his image, concealing a secret smile hiding among the stars both seemingly absorbed in metaphysical musings taking time to enjoy life's precious small pleasures. How the heart can careen in his chest to gaze into her eyes casting beauty like a spell or a glow of starlight behind thin cloud here is something spiritual that pierces the veil into a world beyond this one- a smudge of heaven for even a tiny fleeting second.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 6/26/2015 1:48:00 AM
There is nothing like a baby of your own to bridge gap about contemplation of the universe. Loved the imagery. Jan 7
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Jaycee Cervenka
Date: 6/27/2015 5:11:00 PM
Welcome, Josefina, this is a very open community. It is easy to make circles of friends and new ones are always welcome!
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Josefina Costales
Date: 6/27/2015 4:00:00 PM
THANKS Janet for dropping by. Am new here and so far have received welcoming comments. Children are my fav topics

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