Michael J. Falotico Poet Rhyme

A Smile Kept

I had a dream today when I was awake....
Saw an old friend with nothing at stake....
Said words we never could get out before....
Times have changed and so closed the door....
But a smile came back with some piece of mind....
And some old wounds have healed that were not kind....
Got a chance to remember without all the pain....
And so our lives have missed ,we both changed lanes....
I hope the smile is for you too, and a peaceful sleep....
So glad this dream came today, and a smile I could keep...

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Dana Smith December 4, 2010 at 12:03 PM I enjoyed all of your writing today, Michael. I'm looking forward to reading more.. Dana

Elizabeth Bark November 27, 2010 at 1:03 PM I love this...its interesting to me how all the people who hurt us in our life we stil have very strong feelings for...i just wish i could lose all my feelings for mine...but this is very well written...i can almost picture myself in the room...thanks for all the sweet coments and wise words of wisdom.... with love always and forever... Lizzy.b <3

April Marie Johnson November 25, 2010 at 6:53 AM Thank you

Sara Kendrick November 11, 2010 at 5:17 AM Great one..I am glad that you had that daydream which could become a reality...Enjoyed reading your work...Thanks for stopping by and reading my write "Angle Battles For Me". The name of my nurse tech was Angle Battles and the write came from her name...Sara

Carolyn Devonshire November 10, 2010 at 9:56 AM Definitely a favorite for me, Michael! Whenever you are able to make amends and restore a friendship, it is like a (day)dream come true! I was thinking about this very topic earlier today. Awesome! Love, Carolyn

Sharon Ruebel November 10, 2010 at 9:31 AM Michael, This Rhyme is so true of many of us. Well done I enjoyed reading you this morning. Thank you Michael for all your kind words.

Nette Onclaud November 10, 2010 at 8:04 AM sentimenal and honest portrayal of the value of friendship, michael... great use of words with uplifting tonality.. warmest, nette

Wilma Neels November 10, 2010 at 6:20 AM Michael, I think we all get to a point in our lives where relationships change and once you can look back on them with a smile its almost like feeling its ok to move on... I love this piece, so much said... love Wilma

Francine Roberts November 9, 2010 at 5:43 PM love it, understand it too, much enjoyed Michael

Linda-Marie Sweetheart November 9, 2010 at 4:36 PM Yes Michael time does change people and things and relationships from the way they used to be.. but never burn any bridges or close any doors.. enjoyed your serious lines today luv.. hope u had a fantastic day yesterday.. so cold here .. is it Summer yet???haha..happy u enjoyed my Nonet entry for Thvia's contest.. I simply luv that form.lately..luv.. your Jersey Girl forever and always..