A Smile- a Frown

Smiling unexpected call hearing voice of an old friend renewing a bond Frowning busy freeway scene driver looking down , texting what's so important?
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Kovrlija Avatar
September 2, 2012 at 11:05 AM
I really like this poem
Anish Avatar
August 28, 2012 at 12:58 PM
That is one thing you had better not do- testing while driving. Fine senryu here! Peace & Love Matthew Anish
Croft Avatar
August 19, 2012 at 4:12 PM
very nice.
Wesley Avatar
August 19, 2012 at 7:57 AM
Good sense governs the time of a call which you demonstrate so ably here. Great write!
Poet Avatar
August 19, 2012 at 6:53 AM
And you have done it in perfect 5/7/5!
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August 19, 2012 at 6:52 AM
Very nicely done Barbara.Michael is going to like it!
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