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A Small Handful of Haiku: Nature's Process

The clamor heard in The awakening of Spring Dies down in Summer Revives briefly 'til The crisp tanginess of Fall Succumbs to Winter

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Date: 10/10/2024 10:48:00 AM
Beautiful description!
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Date: 9/30/2024 3:38:00 AM
I'm absolutely amazed by the creativity that you've poured in this haiku poem! So incredibly maintained with an intriguing flow and the depth is really heart-touching wherein you've painted the stories of all four seasons in just a few words.. It all feels like floating in the blink of an eye.. Beautifully done!
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Jim Slaughter
Date: 9/30/2024 10:16:00 AM
Hiya, thank you so much for your kind and generous comments.
Date: 9/24/2024 8:32:00 PM
All seasons are .mentioned in this haiku. I like the flow and thoughts.
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Jim Slaughter
Date: 9/27/2024 9:59:00 AM
Many thanks, Hilda.
Date: 9/23/2024 12:27:00 PM
Hi Jim your Haikus sum up the seasons perfectly.
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Jim Slaughter
Date: 9/24/2024 10:10:00 AM
Thank you, John.
Date: 9/22/2024 1:28:00 PM
Nicely painted Jim. :)
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Jim Slaughter
Date: 9/23/2024 10:55:00 AM
Thanks, Linda.
Date: 9/22/2024 5:51:00 AM
Interesting write! crisp tanginess…original!
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Jim Slaughter
Date: 9/23/2024 10:55:00 AM
Kim, thank you.
Date: 9/21/2024 2:56:00 PM
a lovely pairing, jim! i enjoyed...
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Jim Slaughter
Date: 9/23/2024 10:54:00 AM
Thanks, Ilene.

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