A Small Handful of Haiku: Nature's Process

The clamor heard in
The awakening of Spring
Dies down in Summer

Revives briefly 'til
The crisp tanginess of Fall
Succumbs to Winter
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Croft Avatar
October 10, 2024 at 10:48 AM
Beautiful description!
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September 30, 2024 at 3:38 AM
I'm absolutely amazed by the creativity that you've poured in this haiku poem! So incredibly maintained with an intriguing flow and the depth is really heart-touching wherein you've painted the stories of all four seasons in just a few words.. It all feels like floating in the blink of an eye.. Beautifully done!
Slaughter Avatar
September 30, 2024 at 10:16 AM
Hiya, thank you so much for your kind and generous comments.
Greenhough Avatar
September 24, 2024 at 8:32 PM
All seasons are .mentioned in this haiku. I like the flow and thoughts.
Slaughter Avatar
September 27, 2024 at 9:59 AM
Many thanks, Hilda.
Read Avatar
September 23, 2024 at 12:27 PM
Hi Jim your Haikus sum up the seasons perfectly.
Slaughter Avatar
September 24, 2024 at 10:10 AM
Thank you, John.
Fowler Avatar
September 22, 2024 at 1:28 PM
Nicely painted Jim. :)
Slaughter Avatar
September 23, 2024 at 10:55 AM
Thanks, Linda.
Rodrigues Avatar
September 22, 2024 at 5:51 AM
Interesting write! crisp tanginess…original!
Slaughter Avatar
September 23, 2024 at 10:55 AM
Kim, thank you.
Bauer Avatar
September 21, 2024 at 2:56 PM
a lovely pairing, jim! i enjoyed...
Slaughter Avatar
September 23, 2024 at 10:54 AM
Thanks, Ilene.
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