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A Slow Death

cease hostile behavior, antagonists bleeding sword- the silent soul 



One Liner Poetry Contest 
Sponsor: Silent One 
12-23-2019 


*Placed 2nd in the contest

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Paul Callus

January 1, 2020 at 5:25 AM

Negative words and action can be silent killers! Congratulations on your fine win, Charles. Regards // paul

MD Johnson

December 28, 2019 at 7:38 PM

Congratulations! Well done.

John Watt

December 28, 2019 at 1:09 AM

Thank you for this powerful statement, Charlie. I raise a glass to peace. Congrats ~ John

Sandra Adams

December 27, 2019 at 9:11 PM

back to say congratulations...i knew it would be up there on the winner's list :) hugs

Ann Gilmour

December 27, 2019 at 8:23 PM

Powerful words Charlie. Many congrats on you win. With kindest thoughts Ann xx

Charles Messina

December 27, 2019 at 8:25 PM

Thank you so much, Ann. Sending love xx

Janice Canerdy

December 27, 2019 at 4:58 PM

Great one-liner, Charles. CONGRATS on your win! Janice

Charles Messina

December 27, 2019 at 8:19 PM

Thank you so much, Janice :)

Eve Roper

December 27, 2019 at 2:19 PM

Charles, I wish everyone would cease hostile behavior....congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve

Charles Messina

December 27, 2019 at 8:19 PM

That makes two of us, Eve. Thank you so much. Hugs :)

Line Gauthier

December 27, 2019 at 2:06 PM

Congrats on your podium finish, Charles. Well done.

Charles Messina

December 27, 2019 at 8:19 PM

Thank you very much, Live :)

Andrea Dietrich

December 27, 2019 at 1:30 PM

Very nicely done congrats on the win.

Charles Messina

December 27, 2019 at 8:20 PM

Thank you very much, Andrea :)

Kai Michael Neumann

December 27, 2019 at 12:52 PM

Congratulations Charles. Dark and eerie.

Charles Messina

December 27, 2019 at 8:20 PM

Thank you, Kai...peace my friend

Silent One

December 27, 2019 at 9:59 AM

damn... Congratulations on your placement in the contest..

Charles Messina

December 27, 2019 at 8:22 PM

LOL... Thank you so much for my placement SO. Truly humbled to finish so high on the podium. Peace & love brother. Cm

Kai Michael Neumann

December 27, 2019 at 7:53 AM

I second Lu Loo. Simply wow. Kind wishes, Kai

Beautiful Scars

December 25, 2019 at 10:56 AM

wow, I read this 4 times and each time it got deeper. Amazing my friend. Merry Christmas to you and yours...x:-)-luloo

Line Gauthier

December 25, 2019 at 9:54 AM

Powerful, Charles. Merry Christmas! Best wishes to you and your loved ones for 2020.

Charles Messina

December 25, 2019 at 10:01 AM

Thank you. Line. Merry Christmas and wishing you and yours a Happy & Healthy New Year!

Constance La France

December 24, 2019 at 8:33 AM

Charlie, this touched my soul, for sure some like to antagonize when all we want is peace and tranquility, wonderful write and I am sure Silent One will love it because he is all about tranquility ~

Kim Rodrigues

December 24, 2019 at 7:56 AM

I like it! A top contender!

Sandra Adams

December 24, 2019 at 6:14 AM

Oh I like this one ... powerful and I think this one will top the winner’s list. Great write Charlie :) hugs

Mystic Rose Rose

December 24, 2019 at 5:15 AM

Pain can be inflicted without a single word, nicely done dear Charles, Best wishes for the season,

Tom Cunningham

December 23, 2019 at 11:09 AM

Great one liner Charlie, good luck. Hope you and yours have a lovely Christmas and best wishes for the new year. Tom

Alexis Y.

December 23, 2019 at 9:33 AM

WoW! Charles You've penned such a deep one- liner. I wish you the best of luck in the contest. Have wonderful day. Happy Holidays to you and your family and friends:-) Alexis

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