A Slip Into Love

calm, placid, strong as a rock weakness, emotion never fluttered his face times I wondered if he had a beating heart beneath the impassive solid wall we talked and argued I sailed in emotion broke and crumbled dropped and soaked my pillow he snored all night like the sun, he rose with a smile turned me around to dismiss last night. head splitting, face ashen, lips quivering I told him I could take no more started to pick and pack my part of our newly wedded life his tall broad frame blocked the closet he held my hand,always puny in his looked not at me but the floor and let the salt flow fully clothed, I saw him naked cold out in the open I slipped, gripped and groped but my heels dragged me into the tepid river of love from where I couldn’t swim out ever. Written on 06/20/2016
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Devnath  Avatar
June 25, 2016 at 2:20 PM
Congrats on your win my lovely friend. Loved always, bl
A  Avatar
June 25, 2016 at 1:41 PM
Sara, congrats on your win. Skat
Rockwell Avatar
June 25, 2016 at 10:04 AM
A powerful write! Evokes many emotions in me. Thank you so much for entering my contest.
Tabi Avatar
June 21, 2016 at 5:05 AM
Hmmmmm, did you see fish in the river, hahaha
Chansarkar Avatar
June 21, 2016 at 8:38 AM
Hmm don't remember now!
Dietrich Avatar
June 20, 2016 at 3:49 PM
wow, it turned into something very different in the middle. This was an amazing one the way you developed it, Sara.
Chansarkar Avatar
June 21, 2016 at 8:37 AM
Thanks Andrea,appreciate your words,I am a fan of your poems!
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