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A Slice of Life

This rainy morning you gave me a feel of your flower Thank you I want to give you a poem in return Soaked in pleasant smell of the showers I like your eyes going through these words from green fern Thank you I want to give you a poem in return As you sing in the fifth avenue pavement I like your eyes going through these words from green fern As the passer-by drops a dollar swayed by the moment As you sing in the fifth avenue pavement Raindrops dripping from your soft brown hair As the passer-by drops a dollar swayed by the moment You smile and feel you can now pay for the Medicare Raindrops dripping from your soft brown hair Your old mom is in her sickbed at your home You smile and feel you can now pay for the Medicare I have mentioned her in a stanza of my poem Your old mom is in her sickbed at your home Look the sky is clearing up and the blue returns I have mentioned her in a stanza of my poem Let us pray she gets well and you are in my arms Look the sky is clearing up and the blue returns Soaked in pleasant smell of the showers Let us pray she gets well and you are in my arms This rainy morning you gave me a feel of your flower ______________________________________________________ 25/07/2017

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Date: 7/26/2017 3:32:00 PM
Beautiful visuals in this poem of hope Probir.
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Date: 7/25/2017 10:05:00 AM
Very beautiful Pantoum, Probir:)
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Date: 7/25/2017 3:55:00 AM
Probir this is such a nice pantoum. Very well done with this challenging form of poetry. :)
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Date: 7/25/2017 2:21:00 AM
This poem my friend, Probir, doesn't deserve only a slice of life but many large slices of it! Excellent Pantoum!
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Date: 7/25/2017 1:29:00 AM
This touched me tenderly Probir. A beautiful creative Pantoum! : )
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