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A Sky So Free

I long to be free, away from this place When i see the sky, i want to embrace Run my fingers through the clouds Peace at last i have found I open my eyes, now that im aware Im still on the ground, it was just the wind in my hair And for that i envy the very birds in the sky As their great wings soar, their hearts heard It may sound absurd, but how i wish i was a bird, flying free in the sky All at least untill im willing to die

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 5/21/2016 10:13:00 AM
Louisa Estrada, well penned. Enjoyed reading your thoughts and words today. *SKAT*
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Date: 5/24/2011 8:43:00 AM
I have enjoyed your write today. cory
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Date: 5/24/2011 7:26:00 AM
Thank you for sharing your poetry with us today. It was a very interesting write. It was a pleasure to read your poetry today Louisa. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/24/2011 6:22:00 AM
I enjoyed these lines. The only way to fly is to use the only power we have...Choice.
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