A Sky Of Fireflies

As the evening starts to wander in and 
The sun finds her place to hide,
I smile and close my eyes as my thoughts
Take me back to another place and time.
It takes me back where a young man 
Stood by my side,
Though it had been so long ago 
I could still see  him stand there and I 
Remembered how I loved him so.
We’d walk together hand and hand 
Planning how our life together would  be.
He taught me how to catch fireflies and told me
How they glowed only for me.
We walked along in the evening night
But that was a long time ago,
We’ve changed as one could see
A sudden breeze brings me back to 
This time and reality,
As I open my eyes I see a sky of fireflies 
And  the man who promised he’d always 
Stay by me

Copyright © | Year Posted 2025



Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 2/21/2025 3:59:00 AM
This is so beautiful and touching how youv woven this for the prompt: so poignant how you’ve reminisced the moment shared with fireflies, one that remains forever close to your heart. I especially love the opening two lines in this. Drew me right in! Its a very emotive poem! And how you’ve painted imagerh so vividly is captivating! Thank you for supporting my contest! Congratulations on your win
Login to Reply
Riveiro - Mitchell Avatar
Louise Riveiro - Mitchell
Date: 2/22/2025 7:56:00 AM
Thank you so much for you kind comments I always try yo capture the moment or time of the piece and let the readers imagination travel it's own path. I simply offer a subtle bread crumbs to follow. Once agian thank you for your comments
Get a Premium Membership
Get more exposure for your poetry and more features with a Premium Membership.
Book: Radiant Verses: A Journey Through Inspiring Poetry

Member Area

My Admin
Profile and Settings
Edit My Poems
Edit My Quotes
Edit My Short Stories
Edit My Articles
My Comments Inboxes
My Comments Outboxes
Soup Mail
Poetry Contests
Contest Results/Status
Followers
Poems of Poets I Follow
Friend Builder

Soup Social

Poetry Forum
New/Upcoming Features
The Wall
Soup Facebook Page
Who is Online
Link to Us

Member Poems

Poems - Top 100 New
Poems - Top 100 All-Time
Poems - Best
Poems - by Topic
Poems - New (All)
Poems - New (PM)
Poems - New by Poet
Poems - Read
Poems - Unread

Member Poets

Poets - Best New
Poets - New
Poets - Top 100 Most Poems
Poets - Top 100 Most Poems Recent
Poets - Top 100 Community
Poets - Top 100 Contest

Famous Poems

Famous Poems - African American
Famous Poems - Best
Famous Poems - Classical
Famous Poems - English
Famous Poems - Haiku
Famous Poems - Love
Famous Poems - Short
Famous Poems - Top 100

Famous Poets

Famous Poets - Living
Famous Poets - Most Popular
Famous Poets - Top 100
Famous Poets - Best
Famous Poets - Women
Famous Poets - African American
Famous Poets - Beat
Famous Poets - Cinquain
Famous Poets - Classical
Famous Poets - English
Famous Poets - Haiku
Famous Poets - Hindi
Famous Poets - Jewish
Famous Poets - Love
Famous Poets - Metaphysical
Famous Poets - Modern
Famous Poets - Punjabi
Famous Poets - Romantic
Famous Poets - Spanish
Famous Poets - Suicidal
Famous Poets - Urdu
Famous Poets - War

Poetry Resources

Anagrams
Bible
Book Store
Character Counter
Cliché Finder
Poetry Clichés
Common Words
Copyright Information
Grammar
Grammar Checker
Homonym
Homophones
How to Write a Poem
Lyrics
Love Poem Generator
New Poetic Forms
Plagiarism Checker
Poetry Art
Publishing
Random Word Generator
Spell Checker
Store
What is Good Poetry?
Word Counter
Hide Ad