Sandra Adams Poet Free verse

A Sky Cries

no sun can rise
when a lonely sky cries
this road’s collecting leaves 
like mind collects dreams

i hear the echoes
of tires skimming puddles 
as i slide in thoughts of you 

unsettled
in october’s rain

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Gershon Wolf October 3, 2019 at 8:09 PM Your ability to project unease and discord is remarkable. Kudos! Warm wishes, Gershon Sandra Adams October 3, 2019 at 8:17 PM thank you my friend :) hugs

Anne-Lise Andresen October 3, 2019 at 12:51 PM - October rain ... that's when we miss the summer ... and sunshine ... a muted morning, Sandra - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Sandra Adams October 3, 2019 at 5:31 PM Thank you my friend...october rain always feels worse then july or august rain...just raw... hugs :)

Hello There October 3, 2019 at 10:57 AM A lovely poetic piece, Sandra ~ Sandra Adams October 3, 2019 at 10:59 AM thank you my friend...just a morning scribble before work...rainy days always get me going... hugs

John Gondolf October 3, 2019 at 7:41 AM Nicely written, Sandy, a sad longing for love puts the soul in a dreary mood. All the best my friend. Hugs, John Sandra Adams October 3, 2019 at 8:58 AM Thanks John, just longing for the sun in the dreary morning rain... hugs :)

Chris Green October 3, 2019 at 7:36 AM Some mornings are dreary and damp but eventually the sun comes out and allows us to see the beauty around us. Like this poem, definitely beauty upon this page. Sandra Adams October 3, 2019 at 8:56 AM Thank you my friend...just a little scribble about the weather... the sun will come out tomorrow... :) hugs

Vijay Pandit October 3, 2019 at 7:35 AM Gloomy day looks like, Sandy--sun is just around the corner! Sandra Adams October 3, 2019 at 8:55 AM Thank you Vijay, supposed to rain all day...sun will rise tomorrow :) hugs

Line Gauthier October 3, 2019 at 7:06 AM Bravo, Sandra. Awesome poem. Sandra Adams October 3, 2019 at 8:54 AM Thank you Line, was just having rainy morning fun :) hugs

Regina Mcintosh October 3, 2019 at 5:34 AM So pretty. Blessings to you Sandra Adams October 3, 2019 at 8:53 AM thank you, just a morning scribble :) hugs