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A Sky Cries

no sun can rise when a lonely sky cries this road’s collecting leaves like mind collects dreams i hear the echoes of tires skimming puddles as i slide in thoughts of you unsettled in october’s rain

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Gershon Wolf

Date: 10/3/2019 8:09:00 PM

Your ability to project unease and discord is remarkable. Kudos! Warm wishes, Gershon

Sandra Adams
Date: 10/3/2019 8:17:00 PM

thank you my friend :) hugs

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 10/3/2019 12:51:00 PM

- October rain ... that's when we miss the summer ... and sunshine ... a muted morning, Sandra - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Sandra Adams
Date: 10/3/2019 5:31:00 PM

Thank you my friend...october rain always feels worse then july or august rain...just raw... hugs :)

Hello There

Date: 10/3/2019 10:57:00 AM

A lovely poetic piece, Sandra ~

Sandra Adams
Date: 10/3/2019 10:59:00 AM

thank you my friend...just a morning scribble before work...rainy days always get me going... hugs

John Gondolf

Date: 10/3/2019 7:41:00 AM

Nicely written, Sandy, a sad longing for love puts the soul in a dreary mood. All the best my friend. Hugs, John

Sandra Adams
Date: 10/3/2019 8:58:00 AM

Thanks John, just longing for the sun in the dreary morning rain... hugs :)

Chris Green

Date: 10/3/2019 7:36:00 AM

Some mornings are dreary and damp but eventually the sun comes out and allows us to see the beauty around us. Like this poem, definitely beauty upon this page.

Sandra Adams
Date: 10/3/2019 8:56:00 AM

Thank you my friend...just a little scribble about the weather... the sun will come out tomorrow... :) hugs