A Skim-Milk Sky

A wet mist wraps itself around my shoulders like a damp bath towel: while my spine shudders at its touch. A skim-milk sky retains a bluish tinge as a yellow sun swims behind a reef of clouds absorbing its light like a thirsty sponge. And I see my world through a grey lens that distorts my vision; like I'm wearing the wrong prescription glasses. Both sky and land don sullied shades of grey: as if Autumn's heart were pierced, and its vibrant colors, all bled away. Winter winds, laden with flakes of snow, scatter scarlet, gold, orange, and crimson leaves: sweeping them under a carpet of white on white, seemingly overnight.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Harding Avatar
August 17, 2021 at 3:15 AM
Ooooh.... I love this style! Very crisp and compelling and your piece really exemplifies that. I just might give it a try...
Pinet Avatar
August 17, 2021 at 7:15 AM
Thanks, Lycia, your comments are welcomed and appreciated my friend, Emile.
Daniel Avatar
August 1, 2021 at 11:30 PM
WOW! I can see the mist through your lines, great imagism, Emile:) a fav:)
Pinet Avatar
August 2, 2021 at 6:27 AM
Thanks, so much Jo, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
Mcintosh Avatar
July 31, 2021 at 6:36 PM
Amazing!!! I could feel the mist..... i love it. Hope I can write something that will be even a little as good as this is. I love it! God bless you, Love, Gina
Pinet Avatar
August 1, 2021 at 8:14 AM
Thanks, Regina, As always I welcome and appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
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