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A Siren's Fancy

Twilight dreams lead me to a mystic place Where Sirens alight on wings of gemmed threads As fair Teles allures till harps ignite On waters foiled above lush ocean-beds Sunken caves line the tides where men yield To fluid hums trilling like drops so gold I pivot around feathered limbs varnished With aquatic splash of murmurs untold Gliding on trails adorned with rare corals Attractive nymphs bathe on the shore to play While laughter ripples grinding their curved hips Before darkness finds a male to betray I gaze and absorb this exotic scene Recalling my claim, sea maiden of night A fancy that beguiles my hours’ wonder Never to appear again in hindsight. Siren-- A sea nymph with the upper body of a woman and winged, bird-like lower body. *Teles—Greek Siren of Perfection Mythological Animals/Birds Contest: Shadow Hamilton by nette onclaud

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Date: 6/19/2013 1:24:00 PM
Nette, CONGRATULATIONS in Shadow's .... Mythological Animals or Birds Contest ....... Have a nice day * SKAT
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Date: 6/19/2013 3:01:00 AM
Nette congratulations on your fine wind. Described simply and easy to understand. Warm Smiles, Connie
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Date: 6/19/2013 12:24:00 AM
Congratulations nette you write so well love xx
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Date: 6/18/2013 8:05:00 PM
congrats Nette ty for taking part Shadow x smile
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Date: 6/15/2013 8:02:00 AM
Beautiful !
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Date: 6/13/2013 10:20:00 AM
I love this entry Nette! You have delighted me to no end with the mastery you have portrayed within this amazing poem my friend! You sure have such a brilliant mind, and so vastly filled with mastery and imagination whenever you want it to fill your poetic lines! What an outstanding piece, Great Work!!
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Date: 6/13/2013 7:04:00 AM
You have taken me to another world with this gem!Love it nette.
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Date: 6/13/2013 5:32:00 AM
Bewitched by your siren's verse prisoner of its beauty remain! Good luck my dear!
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Date: 6/12/2013 10:40:00 PM
Exquisite one, Nette! Yes, it has been a while and it is really good to see you!! My best wishes for the contest. I didn't write one for this contest....lacking inspiration. LOL Love, Annalise
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Date: 6/12/2013 4:38:00 PM
Oooooohhhhhh....I was taken in by this nette ....awesome...
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Date: 6/12/2013 3:15:00 PM
Such an exotic revelation. Seduction's breath filled with hidden agendas. This was fantastic!
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Date: 6/12/2013 2:27:00 PM
subtly sensual, Cherie! I do hope to see this up on top... the last stanza... ahhhhh...yes :D I was exhausted in every way imaginable, yesterday. and so I crawled into bed right after Verity fell asleep, felt like I'd been stampeded... will (SHOULD be able to) reply to your soupie tonight... just so tired... xoxox
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Date: 6/12/2013 11:56:00 AM
- Erotic sea nymphs .... lovely written, Nette. - (Maybe they are in reality :)))) - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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