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A Sip of Love

clutching at straws
heads touching they slowly sipped
a shared ice cream soda

John G. Lawless
9/22/2020

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Anne-Lise Andresen

October 6, 2020 at 10:35 AM

- Sounds like a beginning of falling in love - Congratulations on your great third place in the contest, John :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Linda Alice Fowler

October 6, 2020 at 6:05 AM

So sweet John. Congratulations! Linda

Regina Mcintosh

October 6, 2020 at 5:07 AM

Congrats on your top win :) It is so deserved. Love this! Bless you, dear friend

Victor Buhagiar

September 25, 2020 at 6:22 AM

Good thing they did not kiss with this pandemic around. Clever ruse. ~~

Andrea Dietrich

September 24, 2020 at 1:18 PM

hahaha, an actual CLUTCHING at straws that also serves as its own metaphor for what may happen with them. You are so good!

Daniel Turner

September 22, 2020 at 4:46 PM

Good one, John. I doubt very many here have ever had the pleasure. Just not the world we live in anymore. We had an old drugstore with a counter where one could order a burger, fries and shake for less than 50 cents.. Those were the good old days.