A Sip of Love

clutching at straws heads touching they slowly sipped a shared ice cream soda John G. Lawless 9/22/2020

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Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 10/6/2020 10:35:00 AM

- Sounds like a beginning of falling in love - Congratulations on your great third place in the contest, John :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 10/6/2020 6:05:00 AM

So sweet John. Congratulations! Linda

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 10/6/2020 5:07:00 AM

Congrats on your top win :) It is so deserved. Love this! Bless you, dear friend

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 9/25/2020 6:22:00 AM

Good thing they did not kiss with this pandemic around. Clever ruse. ~~

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/24/2020 1:18:00 PM

hahaha, an actual CLUTCHING at straws that also serves as its own metaphor for what may happen with them. You are so good!

Daniel Turner

Date: 9/22/2020 4:46:00 PM

Good one, John. I doubt very many here have ever had the pleasure. Just not the world we live in anymore. We had an old drugstore with a counter where one could order a burger, fries and shake for less than 50 cents.. Those were the good old days.

Jan Allison

Date: 9/22/2020 12:39:00 PM

oh what a clever take on the contest theme:-) hugs jan xx

Susan Woodrow

Date: 9/22/2020 12:07:00 PM

nice take on the contest theme! :)