A Single Rose

Just a single rose bloomed there 
among the neglect and all the weeds
I took such pleasure in its color
for nothing else in this garden of thorny bush
could compare to its beauty
How I longed to reach forward and pluck it
to lay it upon my lost love's grave
but I dare not- for it was not mine to take
nothing thus far had cheered her lonely resting place
I oft had tried and failed
for it is a miserable site to behold of grey stone so cold
She too like the rose was a rare beauty among a sea of thorns
and just as that single rose she too was cruelly chose
I stoop to read her faded name and kneel in silent prayer
and just as I am about to leave I place the single rose there.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2020



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Date: 2/1/2020 8:24:00 PM
This was a lovely, sad and solemn narrative... I loved it and felt seriously moved by its very essence. Wonderfully done!
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Julie Achilles
Date: 2/4/2020 3:21:00 AM
thank you so much Ann, have a great week, Julie
Date: 1/30/2020 2:11:00 PM
Very moving narration that brings tears to one's eyes my dearest, Julie. Excellently done. Hugs xxx
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Julie Achilles
Date: 2/4/2020 3:21:00 AM
Thank you Demetrios, Hugs xxx
Date: 1/30/2020 11:45:00 AM
Beautifully sad Julie. This one touched my heart
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Julie Achilles
Date: 2/4/2020 3:25:00 AM
Thanks Chris, regards Julie
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