A Sin

Sex before marriage is way more than just a sin. It is a demon that young girls praise to calm their insecure rush. It is lust that is destined to turn all goals into worthless dust. He will tell you words that heals your bruised heart ,he will give you more than a blush and you will view him as more a crush. He will make you feel like love comes after sexual moments. You will no longer see yourself as a potential doctor but braise your hopes to become his future wife. He will change all your dreams and goals and believe me dear he will do it all for the sake of sex before marriage. Don't let your hormones repose your brain to think. Don't let him murder the brightness of your promising future. Don't let all the hard works, sweats and hustles that your parents invested on you to sink deep into a bottomless hole he dug with charms. Don't let his wink forbid you to think. Sex before married is way more than just a sin. It is an act that will potentially make all your fresh goals to rot ,molt and green.

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 2/27/2016 12:28:00 PM

Thapelo,, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@

Thapelo Kekana
Date: 2/27/2016 3:59:00 PM

i appreciate this warm welcome. feel like i found a home that my heart craved for years. for me poetry is more of a calling than a skill. feel like i am destined to heal and change worlds with writes. thank you Friend. # reading your work.