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A Simple Rhyme

Out with the old And into the new Coming from black And turning it blue Getting through hate Giving it with love Coming up from hell Going to heaven above Your arms are closed The wings spread wide Telling the truth Turning them to lies Going from rich Ending in poor Never say less Forever is more Going from dark Stepping into the light What is done wrong Must make it right From the brightest day To the darkest night Losing a battle Winning a fight humans are weak God is might coming from sight going blind what is yours is now mine us wanting is to have dont be sad just be glad do smile please dont frown going from deaf hearing those sounds what was white is now black this is this that was that walking tall feeling small maybe weak but its strong feeling regret praying for hope listen to the do's never the don'ts please be quiet don't make a sound i hate the city but love the town i once was born and soon i'll die this is what i call a simple rhyme

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Date: 10/25/2013 1:10:00 PM
enjoying these again...PD
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Date: 7/31/2013 7:54:00 AM
hey, post a new one... :-) SKAT
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Date: 9/19/2010 10:47:00 AM
GOOD AFTER NOON, RAQUEL. Thank you for the comment and reminder about your poetry. I thought you left for good. However I did enjoy your poem. Brings out a new attitude in mind. Hope you are doing good, and what was the change all about. As for me I have to keep both my poet minds alive. LOL, my sister went back to school and her hubby does not let her help me on my poetry account, but I still come and post and comment all my poet friends. Thanks and have a nice day*luv~SKAT
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Date: 9/18/2010 4:05:00 AM
this was so fun to read, the motions don't matter,, ahd fun,, enjoyed your rhyme,..p.d.
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Date: 9/18/2010 2:30:00 AM
Enjoyed your verse , Raquel
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