A Simple Poem

Poems are like  bubbles in a bubble bath.

Rainbow colours on their surface dancing.

Like images that float within my mind.

Gently they burst in rapturous,
fragrance of sublime expressions.
And voluptuous wondrous,
colours of passion.

Having swathed your nakedness.
Slowly she tends to reveal,
 parts of you, within.

Intoxicating lives of those.
who are addicted to them.

All this time bottled up.
Like vintage in a cask.

Bewitching images in various hues.
That Michael Angelo on canvas defined.

A liaison of your mind and soul.
Expressions scripted,
from deep within your heart.

A piece of wonderful poetic art.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



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Date: 5/6/2014 11:23:00 AM
Hi Sam, been out of town.. trying to peek in as much from my phone... , Congrats on your poem about poetry. I enjoy the wonderful art of poetry myself... always & forever -- Linda
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Sam Raj
Date: 5/7/2014 10:04:00 AM
Hi Linda, Thanks, sure am glad you find time to peek even though you have a busy schedule. People like you who find time for others are truly apart, perhaps that's what makes you poets. Forever Sam
Date: 5/3/2014 3:05:00 PM
Very descriptive write Sam; loved the imagery; much enjoyed. congrats on win. // paul
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Date: 5/7/2014 10:19:00 AM
Dear Paul, Thanks for your moral support. And as long as I can imagine there is always room for expression. Keep in touch
Date: 5/3/2014 5:11:00 AM
Brilliant write on poetry. Congrats on the win, Samji
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Date: 5/3/2014 9:44:00 AM
Dear Dr. Ramji, Thanks for this wonderful complements. Keep in touch
Date: 5/2/2014 11:53:00 PM
well done Sam, Have a nice weekend.. LOVE.... ... SKAT
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Date: 5/3/2014 3:04:00 AM
Hi SKAT, Thanks a ton. Long time...?, good to hear from you . One of first poets, who gave me a great review on my first poem, posted on this site. You too have a great weekend TC LOL Sam
Date: 5/2/2014 11:01:00 PM
Truly said Sam ! these come from heart n liasion of body wid mind ,,,, great ! congrats on fine win !
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Date: 5/3/2014 2:51:00 AM
Dear Dr. Upma, Congrats on the win. And with such great complements from senior poets like yourself.....!! I truly feel good. Keep in touch
Date: 5/2/2014 10:53:00 PM
I enjoyed the beautiful imagery, smooth word flow, and the elegant descriptions in this poem. Nicely done, Sam! Congrats on your win in my contest!
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Date: 5/3/2014 2:44:00 AM
Thanks Kelly, For giving me the opportunity to express myself in your contest. In fact it all started as doodling that kept to myself. The comments and appreciation means a lot to me. The win of course give me impetus to do more, which I will be able to do with the good wishes of all the poets. Keep in touch
Date: 3/22/2014 3:16:00 AM
NICE ONE
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Date: 4/24/2014 11:38:00 AM
Dear Hans Raj, Thanks a ton. And a ton of apologies, for this inadvertent delay. It's nice to hear a word of appreciation from a fellow countryman. I am very new to this poetic world. Please keep in touch.
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