Caren Krutsinger Poet Free verse

A Simple Hamburger If You Please

Sure.
Ketchup.
Pickle
Horseradish too.

Mayo 
Lettuce?
That’s up to you.

Are your patties thin or thick?
Can I gobble one down right quick?

A touch of butter
A slab of bacon.

Please put them on 
If mine you’re making.

Are your patties thin or thick?
Can I gobble one down right quick?

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Donna Ahsinger May 4, 2018 at 2:52 AM I like it, liked the humor and it was cutely wrote. Keep up the good work. Caren Krutsinger May 4, 2018 at 7:04 AM Thank you Donna. I appreciate your kind words and your visit.

Honestly J.T. May 3, 2018 at 4:03 PM Nicely done; -JT Caren Krutsinger May 4, 2018 at 7:05 AM Thank you, J.T. I appreciate it that you visited and took the time to comment.

Tom Cunningham May 3, 2018 at 10:42 AM Made me think of food too. Not keen on mayo though. Tom Caren Krutsinger May 3, 2018 at 2:38 PM I do not like the real mayo, only Miracle Whip, but I love it so!

Fauxcroft Wade May 3, 2018 at 8:40 AM Well now I need a Hamburger bag. You started my cravings. Caren Krutsinger May 3, 2018 at 8:41 AM hahaha I am SO glad!!