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A Simple Hamburger If You Please

Sure. Ketchup. Pickle Horseradish too. Mayo Lettuce? That’s up to you. Are your patties thin or thick? Can I gobble one down right quick? A touch of butter A slab of bacon. Please put them on If mine you’re making. Are your patties thin or thick? Can I gobble one down right quick?

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Date: 5/4/2018 2:52:00 AM
I like it, liked the humor and it was cutely wrote. Keep up the good work.
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 5/4/2018 7:04:00 AM
Thank you Donna. I appreciate your kind words and your visit.
Date: 5/3/2018 4:03:00 PM
Nicely done; -JT
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 5/4/2018 7:05:00 AM
Thank you, J.T. I appreciate it that you visited and took the time to comment.
Date: 5/3/2018 10:42:00 AM
Made me think of food too. Not keen on mayo though. Tom
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 5/3/2018 2:38:00 PM
I do not like the real mayo, only Miracle Whip, but I love it so!
Date: 5/3/2018 8:40:00 AM
Well now I need a Hamburger bag. You started my cravings.
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 5/3/2018 8:41:00 AM
hahaha I am SO glad!!