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A Silver Fish Jumps

The forest is painted hues of green, with deep shaded places to hide. Birds are singing and twittering a song, the different tweets mingling; falling to a deep hush. Trees form a cathedral like canopy, all the gnarled limbs twisting and entwining; and vines creep and flowers are bright, the dappled sun caresses each space. a stream ripples by over sun bleached rocks it flows ~ a silver fish jumps ______________________ September 5, 2020 Poetry/Verse/A Silver Fish Jumps Copyright Protected, ID 20-1283-663-03 All Rights Reserved, 2020, Constance La France

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Anisha Dutta

Date: 9/17/2020 10:52:00 AM

SO NICE. 'll try following yourinstructions. Hugs

Constance La France
Date: 9/19/2020 8:52:00 AM

Anisha, thanks for the compliment, looking forward to reading your poem _Constance

Joanna Daniel

Date: 9/15/2020 7:02:00 AM

Lovely poem, Constance, I like the line, "the dappled sun caresses each space" :)

Constance La France
Date: 9/15/2020 8:20:00 AM

Jo, thank you for the lovely, I like that line too _Constance

Beata Agustin

Date: 9/14/2020 1:41:00 AM

Thanks for sharing this: the message, the inspiration, the forms woven into one excellent poem... exemplifying what your contest requires. I'm praying for "enablement" to write one. God bless you.

Constance La France
Date: 9/14/2020 9:56:00 AM

Beata, thanks for the visit and the compliment, looking forward to reading your poem _Constance

Jan Allison

Date: 9/13/2020 10:29:00 AM

fabulous example Constance i will try and write for the contest:-) hugs jan xx

Constance La France
Date: 9/14/2020 9:57:00 AM

Jan, thanks for the compliment, I am sure you will write a poem wonderful _Constance

Francine Roberts

Date: 9/10/2020 4:35:00 PM

love the example but doubt if I am up to this challenge bet you get some beauties though

Constance La France
Date: 9/12/2020 1:13:00 AM

Francine, thanks for visiting and for the compliment, oh yes some beautiful poems are being received, maybe you will surprise yourself _Constance

Arturo Michael

Date: 9/6/2020 12:11:00 PM

The pulsing of life...in it self a heartbeat...Nice imagery

Constance La France
Date: 9/7/2020 4:29:00 PM

Arturo, thanks so much for visiting my poem and for the nice comment, appreciate _Constance

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 9/6/2020 1:32:00 AM

Your imagery is so beautiful showcased with this variety of methods!

Constance La France
Date: 9/7/2020 4:29:00 PM

Caren, thanks so much for the compliment _Constance

Constance La France

Date: 9/5/2020 4:23:00 PM

Hi friends, this is the example for my contest Nature, Four Ways, I choose forest, birds, trees, flowers, stream in the order of crystalline, kimo, verse, and haiku to create one poem, hope this helps - Constance