A Silver Fish Jumps

 
The forest is painted hues of green, with deep shaded places to hide. Birds are singing and twittering a song, the different tweets mingling; falling to a deep hush. Trees form a cathedral like canopy, all the gnarled limbs twisting and entwining; and vines creep and flowers are bright, the dappled sun caresses each space. a stream ripples by over sun bleached rocks it flows ~ a silver fish jumps ______________________ September 5, 2020 Poetry/Verse/A Silver Fish Jumps Copyright Protected, ID 20-1283-663-03 All Rights Reserved, 2020, Constance La France
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Dutta Avatar
September 17, 2020 at 10:52 AM
SO NICE. 'll try following yourinstructions. Hugs
La France Avatar
September 19, 2020 at 8:52 AM
Anisha, thanks for the compliment, looking forward to reading your poem _Constance
Daniel Avatar
September 15, 2020 at 7:02 AM
Lovely poem, Constance, I like the line, "the dappled sun caresses each space" :)
La France Avatar
September 15, 2020 at 8:20 AM
Jo, thank you for the lovely, I like that line too _Constance
Agustin Avatar
September 14, 2020 at 1:41 AM
Thanks for sharing this: the message, the inspiration, the forms woven into one excellent poem... exemplifying what your contest requires. I'm praying for "enablement" to write one. God bless you.
La France Avatar
September 14, 2020 at 9:56 AM
Beata, thanks for the visit and the compliment, looking forward to reading your poem _Constance
Allison Avatar
September 13, 2020 at 10:29 AM
fabulous example Constance i will try and write for the contest:-) hugs jan xx
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September 14, 2020 at 9:57 AM
Jan, thanks for the compliment, I am sure you will write a poem wonderful _Constance
Roberts Avatar
September 10, 2020 at 4:35 PM
love the example but doubt if I am up to this challenge bet you get some beauties though
La France Avatar
September 12, 2020 at 1:13 AM
Francine, thanks for visiting and for the compliment, oh yes some beautiful poems are being received, maybe you will surprise yourself _Constance
Michael Avatar
September 6, 2020 at 12:11 PM
The pulsing of life...in it self a heartbeat...Nice imagery
La France Avatar
September 7, 2020 at 4:29 PM
Arturo, thanks so much for visiting my poem and for the nice comment, appreciate _Constance
Krutsinger Avatar
September 6, 2020 at 1:32 AM
Your imagery is so beautiful showcased with this variety of methods!
La France Avatar
September 7, 2020 at 4:29 PM
Caren, thanks so much for the compliment _Constance
La France Avatar
September 5, 2020 at 4:23 PM
Hi friends, this is the example for my contest Nature, Four Ways, I choose forest, birds, trees, flowers, stream in the order of crystalline, kimo, verse, and haiku to create one poem, hope this helps - Constance
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