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A silent witness

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Bound to the bark, it drank the rain, And spread tendrils again and again Unnoticed beauty, soft and deep, While hurried, humans let affection sleep They rush on by, with eyes averted, A quiet presence, quite deserted Their gaze on blossoms, bright and bold, My subtle story left untold But I persisted, strong and still, My purpose held against their will I nourished life, unseen, unheard, A haven for love's tiniest of birds So let them chase with fleeting grace, After vibrant flowers that die in time and space I am the bedrock, deep and low, Where roots run strong, and secrets grow They overlooked; they did not see, the quiet worth that dwelled in me And though they're gone, and seasons turn, It will be their loss that they did not learn On an ancient, gnarled oak's dark side, Grew, a humble, verdant tide Just a simple, protective green hue, A silent witness, a moss heart forever true

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Date: 2/14/2025 6:41:00 PM
Dear AS, your poem is a beautiful, profound portrait of moss. I adore your use of dramatic, vivid imagery to bring the “silent witness” to vibrant life. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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Date: 2/15/2025 1:21:00 PM
The analogy of drawing a picture with words is very endearing to me: " Thank you! A.S.
Date: 2/14/2025 4:44:00 PM
Just absolutely amazing, A.S. ! I will fav this ! My fav from you yet. <3 You fit into this so well. So we both wrote about a tree - though not at the same time. Hugs, dear friend !
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Date: 2/15/2025 1:04:00 PM
Hugs right back to you Paige! Thank you for the fav.. I found myself, as I often do searching for a better version of "I love you." So using moss to witness Valentines day just felt so perfect. I hope you know how special your friendship has been to me! Warmly A.S.
Date: 2/14/2025 4:42:00 PM
Delightful talent AS!
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Date: 2/15/2025 12:59:00 PM
James, It's absolutely exquisite to hear you enjoyed this one! Hope you are doing well my friend! A.S.

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