A Silent Friend

I used to observe every movement you made but you never notice
 I was there too but you never saw
 Shall I tell how you reacted when they forced you to do it
 I was there looking at making fool of yourself
 Shall I show you how much I have cared for you

 I also wanted to join in when you were having fun
 While I observe your move I happen to see the inner you
 When they left you I saw an empty soul
 I saw a person that was so shy

 How I thought you notice my cry 
Who said I was strong to handle it alone
 When I tried to reach you 
But I was so afraid to spoil what you called good times
 They change you and you were changed
 The pact we made was so quickly washed

 Silent in this world we live in
 Seeking for what can please the soul 
Looking with the eyes of a child
 Love written in the face
 Smiling warmly as if things are flying
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014


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Date: 6/8/2014 7:25:00 AM
Zakhe, thanks for the moving thought,,, and uplifting ending... enjoyed...SKAT
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Zakhe Michael Mcunu
Date: 6/10/2014 12:08:00 PM
Skat thanks a lot..
Date: 6/7/2014 10:53:00 PM
Such a heartfelt poem.. I really like it. There is so much emotion on this poem. - All the Best Doris.
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Zakhe Michael Mcunu
Date: 6/10/2014 12:09:00 PM
Doris im glad it reach your emotions actually that is why we write to make a change to other people.thanks.
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