A Sijo Song and Dance

Oh me,oh my aren't we such sweet darlin' girls,don't  ya 
think
well my dears,from this perspective you make a very pretty 
pose
ain't it a shame,the roaring twenties were in black and 
white
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011


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Date: 10/15/2019 9:34:00 AM
Brian, this is great, left me smiling, and I am inspired to give it a whirl !
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Date: 10/15/2019 10:22:00 AM
Thanks Constance,it was written originally for a contest here(many moons back),that included a photo.Nice form I think.
Date: 6/1/2011 9:59:00 PM
This is super cool Brian. Loved it. many congrats.
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Date: 6/1/2011 10:19:00 AM
Many congrats Brian on notching up big HM win in ^Rick's contest with this beautiful imagery. Luv & best wishes - Hitendra Mehta
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Date: 6/1/2011 6:34:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved win in ^Rick's Sijo contest Brian. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/31/2011 7:28:00 PM
haha, this one has a touch of humor to it, Brian, which is so endearing. I really like this one. Glad to see it on the winners' list!
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Date: 5/31/2011 6:39:00 PM
Congratulations on the win in the contest, brian
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Date: 5/31/2011 4:38:00 PM
I love the added bit of humor, and dialogue! Well done, Brian,...congratulations on a fine and unique depiction!!
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Date: 5/31/2011 4:03:00 PM
Congrats Brian on your HM in Rick's contest with this wonderful write on his photo ... enjoy a special honor with luv..
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Date: 5/31/2011 3:06:00 PM
congrats on your fine win! cory
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Date: 3/30/2011 8:11:00 AM
Oh....this is so great....that last line, indeed makes me agree! Those colorful times are kept in imagination. I'm so glad to find you writing for this contest....the short form is your master-class...I've always admired your touch! ~ Hope you are well these days! ...Carrie
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Date: 3/30/2011 4:52:00 AM
Enjoyed reading this exceptional piece of poetry this morning Brian. Thank you for sharing it. Love, Carol
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Date: 3/29/2011 9:03:00 PM
Wonderful composition Brian on the photo of the dancers my friend.. hope u entered it into the contest ... very good last line .. agreed..luv..
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Date: 3/29/2011 4:46:00 PM
Color would have made it more real to me but it was interesting anyway..Sara
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