Notes About The Poem
Sponsor Joseph May
Contest Name One In Five

16/6/25   Picture No. 1  Chosen

A Sight To Behold

The artist paints. Resplendent scene.
On a mirror of liquid gold,
Swims the regal swans so serene.
The artist paints.

A new story is to unfold,  
Sun joins the sea with a glazed sheen.
Nature is a sight to behold.

The golden orb, no longer seen.
Art shows twilight's colors so bold.
Brightly vivid and ever keen.
The artist paints.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Dietrich Avatar
July 7, 2025 at 5:32 PM
I think that picture is so amazing. Your poem lived up to it. Congrats to you.
Canerdy Avatar
July 7, 2025 at 6:42 AM
CONGRATS on your win with this lovely, creative poem! Janice
May Avatar
July 6, 2025 at 6:39 PM
Congrats on your win, Very nicely done
Eslinger Avatar
June 28, 2025 at 4:04 PM
Hi Always Speaks Volumes! I must agree this is a lovely poem & (as a visual artist) quite true at least as goals go. We try, be it with words or lines. Sometimes feel like a swan in different genre, even dance 8-)
Narain Avatar
June 16, 2025 at 10:24 AM
nice poem. Wonderful picture.
Volumes Avatar
June 16, 2025 at 11:12 AM
When I am not sure if my poem is good enough, you, dear friend, come to tell me it is! Oh how I appreciate your kind words. Thank you Jay.
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