A Sight For His Sore Eyes

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how pleasantly his face smiles seeing his soulmate after many hours apart, even though the clouds that float above... his day couldn't look grayer; too in love to notice. Date written: 03/20/2021

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Richard Lamoureux

Date: 3/26/2021 4:55:00 AM

That is a great way to be. Love does truly conquer all. I enjoyed your silver lining which in fact is golden. ;0)

Edward Ibeh
Date: 3/26/2021 4:59:00 AM

Thank you very much for the wonderful comments and visit, Richard:-)

Suzette Richards

Date: 3/24/2021 1:07:00 AM

I love this sijo - a form that I usually struggle with. We all seem to have a blind spot when it comes to certain poetic forms (although I have tried to master 170 forms and examples of poetic movements over the past decade). Thanks for visiting my poem Quest for Freedom - please see the reply. ~Sus

Edward Ibeh
Date: 3/24/2021 4:39:00 AM

Thanks so much for the wonderful feedback and visit, Sus:-)

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 3/21/2021 4:19:00 PM

So romantic, exactly “write”.

Edward Ibeh
Date: 3/21/2021 4:44:00 PM

Thank you, Caren:-)

Sotto Poet

Date: 3/21/2021 10:31:00 AM

When you get some small pleasures from seeing your loved one or your significant other's presence brightens your day, it is evidence of affection. You're just outstanding in this poem, Edward.

Edward Ibeh
Date: 3/21/2021 10:53:00 AM

Thank you very much for the wonderful comments and visit, Lasaab:-)