A Sight For His Sore Eyes

how pleasantly his face smiles seeing his soulmate after
many hours apart, even though the clouds that float above... 
      his day couldn't look grayer; too in love to notice.


Date written: 03/20/2021

cute lovesoulmatesijo

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Richard Lamoureux

March 26, 2021 at 4:55 AM

That is a great way to be. Love does truly conquer all. I enjoyed your silver lining which in fact is golden. ;0)

Edward Ibeh

March 26, 2021 at 4:59 AM

Thank you very much for the wonderful comments and visit, Richard:-)

Suzette Richards

March 24, 2021 at 1:07 AM

I love this sijo - a form that I usually struggle with. We all seem to have a blind spot when it comes to certain poetic forms (although I have tried to master 170 forms and examples of poetic movements over the past decade). Thanks for visiting my poem Quest for Freedom - please see the reply. ~Sus

Edward Ibeh

March 24, 2021 at 4:39 AM

Thanks so much for the wonderful feedback and visit, Sus:-)

Caren Krutsinger

March 21, 2021 at 4:19 PM

So romantic, exactly “write”.

Edward Ibeh

March 21, 2021 at 4:44 PM

Thank you, Caren:-)

Sotto Poet

March 21, 2021 at 10:31 AM

When you get some small pleasures from seeing your loved one or your significant other's presence brightens your day, it is evidence of affection. You're just outstanding in this poem, Edward.

Edward Ibeh

March 21, 2021 at 10:53 AM

Thank you very much for the wonderful comments and visit, Lasaab:-)