A Sigh Or a Relief

I’m at the center of war
I’m afraid of my life in fear
I’ve engaged in a battle fist
Oh, how I so much desire a relief 

Soldiers come, soldiers go, barrack remains

I won’t let in to this defeat 
I’ll never accept to be called unfit
This war I face, I’ll get over it 
Not with a defeat rumbling in a fit

Life has a multi-phase, not unidirectional 

Last time I tried, I almost lost
After a thousand trials that failed 
Now on a new roll call of challenge 
Just pray I  won’t end up drenched 

A light to my feet, to illuminate my ways 

What do I have but a hurdle ?
What do I do but a hustle?
I fiddled my way through, they yelled
Only to be called a bunch of inexperienced fellow 

The odds they see, the even I try hard to imagine 

To live a challenge, to want to die, a duel 
Fill my grips with torrent flow of words 
So I’ll describe all trials I’ve for long faced 
Maybe a sigh or a relief will be welcome with smile

To the writer  on the wall of my heart, the experience of life

Copyright © | Year Posted 2021



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Date: 8/23/2024 2:21:00 AM
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