Emile Pinet Poet Rispetto

A Shout Into The Void

A shout into the void, like a whispered wish,
amplifies the loneliness that dwells within.
And like the feigned beauty of a lionfish:
lust can lure the uninitiated in.

Like an emotional roller coaster ride,
love can be scary; count the tears you've cried.
And in those moments, you fight the urge to scream
when life feels more like a nightmare than a dream.

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Joanna Daniel January 10, 2022 at 10:11 PM Congratulations on a wonderful win, Emile:) Emile Pinet January 11, 2022 at 9:19 AM Thanks, Jo, I appreciate it my friend, Emile.

Edward Ibeh January 1, 2022 at 11:31 AM Heartiest congratulations on your win in my contest, Emile:-) Such a marvelous poem in an interesting form! Emile Pinet January 3, 2022 at 7:10 AM Thanks, Edward, I appreciate your comments and the placement, enjoy the holidays my friend, Emile.

Terry Miller January 1, 2022 at 7:37 AM Congratulations and a well-deserved win for this beautifully written and moving piece. Emile Pinet January 3, 2022 at 7:09 AM Thanks, Terry, I appreciate your comments, enjoy the holidays my friend, Emile.

Christuraj Alex December 31, 2021 at 9:59 PM "you fight the urge to scream" - Great! The whole poem is beautifully written. Congratulations! Emile Pinet January 1, 2022 at 7:22 AM Thanks, Christuraj, I appreciate your comments, enjoy the holidays my friend, Emile.

L Milton Hankins December 14, 2021 at 10:49 AM Exceptionally well-written and with a meaningful theme/subject, Emile. Enjoyed it, and I wish you the best in the contest. Emile Pinet December 14, 2021 at 12:00 PM Thanks, Milt, I appreciate your comments, Merry Christmas, my friend, Emile.

Regina Mcintosh December 14, 2021 at 6:52 AM I love this one... excellent writing. Brilliant. God bless you. Love, Gina Emile Pinet December 14, 2021 at 7:11 AM Thanks, Regina, you have brought a smile to my day, my friend, Emile.