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Rispetto
The rispetto lyric is generally composed of (two quatrains) eight hendecasyllabic (11-syllable) lines. Early on, the rhyme scheme was usually abababcc, but ababccdd is now more prominent.

 

A shout into the void, like a whispered wish, amplifies the loneliness that dwells within. And like the sheer beauty of a lionfish, lust can lure the uninitiated in. Love's an emotional roller coaster ride that leaves you frustrated over tears you've cried. And in those moments, you fight the urge to scream, for life feels more like a nightmare than a dream. 12/14/2021 Pick-A-Title, Vol 27 Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Edward Ibeh Syllables checked with, Howmanysyllables.com Title chosen - "A Shout Into The Void"

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Date: 1/10/2022 10:11:00 PM
Congratulations on a wonderful win, Emile:)
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Date: 1/11/2022 9:19:00 AM
Thanks, Jo, I appreciate it my friend, Emile.
Date: 1/1/2022 11:31:00 AM
Heartiest congratulations on your win in my contest, Emile:-) Such a marvelous poem in an interesting form!
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Date: 1/3/2022 7:10:00 AM
Thanks, Edward, I appreciate your comments and the placement, enjoy the holidays my friend, Emile.
Date: 1/1/2022 7:37:00 AM
Congratulations and a well-deserved win for this beautifully written and moving piece.
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Date: 1/3/2022 7:09:00 AM
Thanks, Terry, I appreciate your comments, enjoy the holidays my friend, Emile.
Date: 12/31/2021 9:59:00 PM
"you fight the urge to scream" - Great! The whole poem is beautifully written. Congratulations!
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Date: 1/1/2022 7:22:00 AM
Thanks, Christuraj, I appreciate your comments, enjoy the holidays my friend, Emile.
Date: 12/14/2021 10:49:00 AM
Exceptionally well-written and with a meaningful theme/subject, Emile. Enjoyed it, and I wish you the best in the contest.
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Date: 12/14/2021 12:00:00 PM
Thanks, Milt, I appreciate your comments, Merry Christmas, my friend, Emile.
Date: 12/14/2021 6:52:00 AM
I love this one... excellent writing. Brilliant. God bless you. Love, Gina
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Date: 12/14/2021 7:11:00 AM
Thanks, Regina, you have brought a smile to my day, my friend, Emile.