A SHORT WINTER'S STORY

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A SHORT WINTER'S STORY 4x4x4x4 POETRY CONTEST SPONSOR : MIRANDA HAWLEY

The beauty of winter. Cotton from cold heaven, softly falls as snow to quiet anxious thoughts. Sleep is warmly restful, from days of peaceful - watching, armchair dreaming, nodding. Quality time for sharing. Thanks for cozy fires: love, cuddling, bundling, baking. Praying for the homeless, boundless, snow drenched wanderers Beauty of the storm, fury. - Oh, so strong! Rage moves soon along. Life keeps rolling on.

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 2/2/2025 5:44:00 AM

Congratulations on your winning work in the contest. Way to go. Creative and descriptive writing. Sara K

Janis Medders Tobechi
Date: 2/3/2025 10:33:00 AM

Thanks Sara. Blessings to you and yours. Janius

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 2/1/2025 7:58:00 PM

Congrats, Janis! Lovely and thoughtful!

Janis Medders Tobechi
Date: 2/3/2025 10:35:00 AM

Thanks for your support. Excuse the typos. had ete surgery today. Love and blessings to you always. Janis

Miranda Hawley

Date: 2/1/2025 3:05:00 PM

The winter is beautiful when I can enjoy the sight from my window inside the house as compared to on the roads. Yes, praying for the homeless! Congratulations to 2nd place winner of my contest.

Janis Medders Tobechi
Date: 2/3/2025 10:37:00 AM

Thanks for the placement. I am sure judging was hard. Liked the contest idea. Blessings of favor Janis

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 1/31/2025 3:12:00 AM

- Winter is beautiful on Christmas cards and in poems... but I can live without winter, Janis - Congratulations on your win in the contest :) - hugs

Janis Medders Tobechi
Date: 2/3/2025 10:40:00 AM

You are not alone in those feelings and some places have seen hard winters. Thanks for the congrats. Typing today after cataract surgery. Forgive typos. Love, Janis

Terry Miller

Date: 1/31/2025 2:08:00 AM

great poem for the 4x4x4x4, congratulations

Janis Medders Tobechi
Date: 2/3/2025 10:40:00 AM

Thank you, Terry. Love and blessings. Janis