A Shooting Star

Everytime 
     I look up the sky
Everytime
     I feel like floating away
Everytime 
     I want to push harder than before
Everytime
     I play P-square songs so I can have the right mood to write about you
Everytime
     I appreciate you in my life
     I appreciate our language that nobody else understands 
Our wishes find themselves somewhere up there 
Everytime we close our eyes.
 
And everytime we open our eyes
Your sunshine reflection 
Your moonlight affection
Is always there  
The tendon of our love never loses connection
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Gifford Avatar
August 6, 2015 at 9:34 PM
You have been very busy writing many poems this month and last. And I am enjoying reading them. Loved this one, too. I don't see many shooting stars, but the night sky covered with stars always is a wonder to me. As if their twinkling says, "Hi" . A 7 Your friend, Darlene
Hunjeri Avatar
August 9, 2015 at 3:52 AM
Thank you Darlene for your sweet comment. Have a good day
Jones Avatar
August 4, 2015 at 4:30 AM
Lovely expressive write. Loved the lines Everytime I feel like floating away and Your moonlight affection. Soulful phrasing. Hugz Ian
Hunjeri Avatar
August 6, 2015 at 7:35 AM
Thank u Ian. I appreciate the visits to my poems. God bless you
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