A Shirt

did you know                did you know
   what i am? well             i'm a shirt, a shirt
  no? can't you tell? do you see what i am yet?
  or shall i tell you more what i can do, what i am
 I am the thing you put on each morning for work
or for play, or for school, and every time you go out 
          but you take me  for  granted,  friend 
           not everyone  has such an advantage
            some don't have more than  a cloth
            to cover a small portion of their skin
           sin marred by the hot sun and by dirt
            the next time you put me on to play
           remember what i have told you today
           you may always have me you may not
            but you can't take things for granted
           because you have minor problems now
            compared to those in other countries
           please stop complaining about them all
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Lindsay Avatar
September 21, 2015 at 1:24 PM
Love it .. I am a fan of shape poems, probably half of mine involve shapes of some sort. You are a kindred spirit ;)
Lamoureux Avatar
December 8, 2012 at 10:51 PM
well done, I might change the Poem name to -What am I. you ask a question but you already rovided the answer. Tha shape and content I felt were excellent. I am unfamiliar with this style so if what I am saying does not make sense totaly ignore it. either way I like your poem.
Song Avatar
August 10, 2012 at 8:48 AM
WOW!! Nice article of poetry!
Croft Avatar
August 7, 2012 at 5:06 PM
very nice shape peom. thanks for your comments
Devnath  Avatar
August 3, 2012 at 12:02 PM
A fantastic topic of complaining in the name of shirt. Loved and enjoyed it. Loved always, bl
Veitenheimer Avatar
August 3, 2012 at 2:08 AM
Very Fun and awesome, I love shape poems.
Price Avatar
June 19, 2012 at 3:56 PM
great read
Madonsela Avatar
June 16, 2012 at 6:29 AM
juli this is a delight. Love the poem! *smiles* RON
Williams Avatar
June 14, 2012 at 1:39 AM
Juli- Michelle well done, I love this form and the poem is great ....David
Kendrick Avatar
June 13, 2012 at 6:16 PM
Great design and topic..These are not easy to do for I have tried doing some ...Thanks for stopping by, reading, and taking the time to comment on my work..Sara
Dietrich Avatar
June 13, 2012 at 5:36 PM
You are really good at this kind of poetry, Juli. I have seen other examples of shape poetry and that's exactly how people should do it, just start talking as if you are that "thing" that you are shaping up to be. Very nice! Are you Mormon too?
Henderson Avatar
June 13, 2012 at 3:39 PM
As you I! Thank you! Peace be with ya..
Stevens Avatar
June 13, 2012 at 2:39 PM
I love this and how you wrote it out to design a shirt...BRAVO!!!
Poet Avatar
June 13, 2012 at 12:00 PM
Hey,this is excellent!!
Poet Avatar
June 13, 2012 at 12:00 PM
Hey,this is excellent!!
Andresen Avatar
June 13, 2012 at 10:00 AM
Nicely done poem and well written Juli-Michelle. - Thank you for visit and comments my poem. - Have a lovely day. - See you soon. - oxox love Anne-Lise
Grisetti Avatar
June 13, 2012 at 9:36 AM
I like the poem and the shape as well. Nicely done.
Nair Avatar
June 13, 2012 at 8:42 AM
Interesting write, Juli, enjoyed...:) Jag
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