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A Shark In My Soup

"Waiter" I cried, "there's a shark in my soup I saw a fin, somewhere in the gloop Granted it's tiny, but it has me on edge And it must be hungry, it's ate all the veg" Entry for Shark in the soup Poetry Contest Sponsored by Anthony Slausin 28/12/18

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Date: 1/6/2019 5:45:00 PM
Very clever and I love the picture :) Congratulations!
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Gary Smith
Date: 1/6/2019 5:52:00 PM
Thank you P.S. :)
Date: 1/6/2019 2:40:00 PM
Oh my, what a great poem and photo! Very clever, Gary. Those bay leaves can look like fins. Congratulations on your success in Anthony's contest. Best wishes, Carolyn
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Date: 1/6/2019 2:53:00 PM
Thank you Carolyn. :)
Date: 1/6/2019 7:07:00 AM
Back with congrats on your win, Gary.
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Gary Smith
Date: 1/6/2019 7:25:00 AM
Thank you Line. :)
Date: 1/6/2019 4:05:00 AM
hilarious take on the contest theme:-) many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 12/28/2018 9:00:00 PM
G'day Gary … so now I gather, the shark is looking for meat on the wrong end of the spoon - thanks Gary - Lindsay
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Gary Smith
Date: 12/29/2018 6:16:00 AM
Thank you Lindsay. :)
Date: 12/28/2018 12:53:00 PM
As my husband would say, you have to be desperately hungry to eat veggies. Cute poem, Gary.
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Gary Smith
Date: 12/28/2018 1:34:00 PM
Thank you Line. :)
Date: 12/28/2018 12:24:00 PM
That was cool Gary. They'll do anything to get us to eat our vegetables. :)
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Gary Smith
Date: 12/28/2018 1:35:00 PM
Thanks Chris. :)

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