Gary Smith Poet Rhyme

A Shark In My Soup

"Waiter" I cried, "there's a shark in my soup

I saw a fin, somewhere in the gloop

Granted it's tiny, but it has me on edge

And it must be hungry, it's ate all the veg"









Entry for
Shark in the soup Poetry Contest
Sponsored by Anthony Slausin
28/12/18

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P.S. Awtry January 6, 2019 at 5:45 PM Very clever and I love the picture :) Congratulations! Gary Smith January 6, 2019 at 5:52 PM Thank you P.S. :)

Carolyn Devonshire January 6, 2019 at 2:40 PM Oh my, what a great poem and photo! Very clever, Gary. Those bay leaves can look like fins. Congratulations on your success in Anthony's contest. Best wishes, Carolyn Gary Smith January 6, 2019 at 2:53 PM Thank you Carolyn. :)

Line Gauthier January 6, 2019 at 7:07 AM Back with congrats on your win, Gary. Gary Smith January 6, 2019 at 7:25 AM Thank you Line. :)

Jan Allison January 6, 2019 at 4:05 AM hilarious take on the contest theme:-) many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx

Lindsay Laurie December 28, 2018 at 9:00 PM G'day Gary … so now I gather, the shark is looking for meat on the wrong end of the spoon - thanks Gary - Lindsay Gary Smith December 29, 2018 at 6:16 AM Thank you Lindsay. :)

Line Gauthier December 28, 2018 at 12:53 PM As my husband would say, you have to be desperately hungry to eat veggies. Cute poem, Gary. Gary Smith December 28, 2018 at 1:34 PM Thank you Line. :)

Chris Green December 28, 2018 at 12:24 PM That was cool Gary. They'll do anything to get us to eat our vegetables. :) Gary Smith December 28, 2018 at 1:35 PM Thanks Chris. :)