A Shadow of Time

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Like the burning tree, resting on the clouds
The glow of the sun, hidden...flourishes 
Mirrored waters, tween the tall grass-marsh, crowds 
Before the night...when the sun perishes
 
Once caught, are the crabs of past generations 
Like rabbits, how fast they come and they go 
My fathers boat, beyond renovations 
I can see him still...with oars he would row
 
Mom, at home waiting...for dad's buckets full 
Waters boiling, nut crackers for the claws 
Grandmother waits too...as she knits her wool 
Waiting to eat crabs with her long jowl jaws 

These days of old I will never forget 
A shadow of time...my mind's silhouette


 
(Photo #3)

Choices Poetry Contest 
Sponsor Sara Kendrick 
5-12-2019

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Panagiota Romios

Date: 6/1/2019 3:45:00 AM

Hi Charles, These are touching thoughts Panagiota

Freddie Robinson Jr.

Date: 5/31/2019 1:24:00 PM

Beautiful nostalgia ... great crescendo ending, Charles! Stellar poetry as usually from your talented pen, my dear friend. Love and peace always.

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 5/30/2019 12:36:00 PM

Your description of this photo is beautifully penned and I love the way it brought memories to life. I could see the father catching the crabs and mother at home preparing for his catch. I'm sure Sara will love it too! Best wishes in her contest, Charlie. Hugs, Carolyn

Early Jae

Date: 5/28/2019 2:15:00 PM

Such a cool sonnet, thanks for sharing this great memory!

Kurt Ravidas

Date: 5/15/2019 4:19:00 PM

Lovely shadowy poetry. Good luck with the contest, Charles. P.S.: I chose #3 too)

Winged Warrior

Date: 5/13/2019 9:24:00 AM

Hey, Charlieku...your shadows just lit up...great entry my friend...in place for a win...^WW^

Susan Ashley

Date: 5/12/2019 9:16:00 PM

I was enchanted by the magic of your poem, Charlie. The imagery is vivid, vibrant, emotionally genuine and conveyed with intimate beauty. Gorgeous! Best wishes for a win and warmest wishes for you, my charming friend.. ~Susan

W.A. Cholt

Date: 5/12/2019 6:26:00 PM

Thoroughly enjoyed this poem. Alive with memories.