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"a Shadow"

The moonlit shines through and creates a shadow that spills all over me..

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James Fraser

Date: 8/23/2010 1:17:00 PM

This lunar love gives us so much material to use. And once again she shines in your Haiku Michael >> James

Juan Paolo Galua

Date: 8/13/2010 4:59:00 AM

I can relate so much with this Michael...I often wander at night when the moon is lovely...beautiful

Eleanore Bourner

Date: 8/11/2010 5:52:00 PM

lovely haiku :) keep it up!------Ell

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 8/11/2010 4:38:00 PM

The brighter the moon, the more intense these shadows appear. Lovely haiku! Love, Carolyn

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 8/11/2010 3:55:00 PM

What an impressive sight from an expressive few lines of poetry.. from my White Knight.. enjoyed your creativity tonight..with luv..

Anthony Nutter

Date: 8/11/2010 3:38:00 PM

Love a full moon and the ghostly shadows created. Nice Haiku.